Never Crossed My Mind - Just Normal...for now by Rainrocks^o^(aka Breanna)

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A girls parents have left on a trip and none of her family can watch her.... but her crushes family can.



chapters

chapter 1: Just Normal...for now

chapter 2: Is it bad or good?

chapter 6: Friends and Foes

chapter 9: Ticked

chapter 10: Double Trouble

chapter 13: Evil Plotting

chapter 14: Brandy and Michal

chapter 15: Lunch

chapter 16: Taking The Stand

chapter 17: World War III

chapter 18: Clash

chapter 19: Discovered, (perhaps)

chapter 20: Call

chapter 21: What and Why?

chapter 22: A Set Mind And Heart

chapter 23: Plan

chapter 24: Airport

chapter 25: Peru

chapter 26: There

chapter 27: More Than Words

chapter 28: Enemy No Longer

chapter 29: HERE? (Final Chapter)

chapter 30: Thanks!!!


Just Normal...for now
chapter 1   —   updated May 15, 2009   —   3457 characters   —   138 people liked this writing   —   92 reviews of this writing
~~~Sophie was eating her breakfast, the usual a bagel with apple jam and a tall blue glass cup full of strawberry milk. Somehow the pink in the milk and the blue glass looked so strange together that it was perfect. She then heard her mother in the bathroom upstairs, so she hurriedly gulped down the milk, grabbed her backpack and went. Sophie didn't really like saying goodbye to her mother; frankly she didn't even like saying hello. There was a world between the two of them that one day would sadly explode, forcing them to interact.

~~~She walked the block over to her bus stop on the suburban road. They used to live in the country, until her father got that promotion and made them move to the strange land of Pennsylvania. She came here on the 1st of September, only to find the cliques were already organized. She played the bassoon so she fit in enough with the band kids. Despite the fact that she was stick thin and had wide hips, she had made friends outside of band too. Most of them had come from the school soccer team and book club. She knew it was kind of pathetic, but still it was better than none.

~~~ When she came to the bus stop she found that it was freezing and ice covered the cement by the curb. Today, she realized, was not a good day to wear a jean skirt and a PEACE OUT! tank top. Sometimes she forgot that she lived in a fridged cold state. Finally, after feeling the numbness nip at her fingers and knuckles, she heard the powerful bus engine come around the corner. Sophie was the third one out of the five to step up on the rumbling beast and then let out a relived breath as she fell into her seat next to her best friend Caitlyn.

~~~ She was basically the oppisite of Sophie, Caitlyn was curvy with thick curly brown hair to her sholders, brown eyes the color of hot cocoa and freckles. Sophie on the other hand had straight bleach blond hair that would never curl even if the curling iron was a flame thrower, she also had a plain and unmarked face,not even long eyelashes to go with her ivy green eyes.

~~~"Hey crazy, trying to get pnemonia!" said Caitlyn. Sophie laughed and smiled, Caitlyn always used medical terms mostly because she wanted to become a doctor.

~~~"I forgot I lived here when I got up this morning, in Texas I could wear this everyday!" said Sophie.

~~~"Yeah," said Caitlyn,"I need to go to Texas."

~~~They both then talked and laughed the whole ride there, until they approached the High School. As freshmen, it was never fun going into the huge school, especially so because she got jitters walking past a particular someone on the way in. A person's name that happened to be Robbie. There wasn't a girl in that school that didn't swoon when he walked in a room. Today as Sophie and Caitlyn stepped off the bus he just happend to be there sitting on a bench surrounded by the cheerleaders. She found it strange, Robbie could date anyone he wanted,cheerleaders,populars, anyone, but he chose not to date.

~~~ As they walked by the bench the impossible happened, he waved at Caitlyn and Sophie and the cheerleaders even scowled at them. Caitlyn didn't like Robby, she claimed he wasn't cute, but she was crazy obviously.To Sophie, his light brown hair swept to one side, ice blue-green eyes and even lips made him irrisisable. Sophie was too stunned to wave back, so Caitlyn did it for her. The rest of the day was a blur just because all Sophie could think of was him.
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Demi said:
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♫Krista♫ said:
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" I really don't like STRAWBERRY. She is a stupid numbskull and she needs to back off and grow a brain! "
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Apurva said:
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