little heart - by Amanda
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updated Mar 16, 2009
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I shall take you out of my chest, little heart, and frame you on my wall like a housewife in the country who quilts herself to death.
Not to death. To Dulldom.
Dulldom. The dullest people on earth. I shall not be dull, little heart. You are gone from me and I have replaced you with a new one. A fresh one. One who has seen nothing but sunshine through glass walls and will never know love and so never know pain. And you, my new little heart, will beat your wings against your glass walls and long for life you don't know and won't ever touch. Kiss. Die.
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Not to death. To Dulldom.
Dulldom. The dullest people on earth. I shall not be dull, little heart. You are gone from me and I have replaced you with a new one. A fresh one. One who has seen nothing but sunshine through glass walls and will never know love and so never know pain. And you, my new little heart, will beat your wings against your glass walls and long for life you don't know and won't ever touch. Kiss. Die.
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McKinley
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Lovely. I am a sucker for the personification of the human heart.
The first line is deadly.
I loved it. "
The first line is deadly.
I loved it. "
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Matt
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The skin becomes continuous. Red thread, white thread, translucent column.
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chapter 1 review
tree hugger
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i liked it, maybe if u learned text u could read MY STORIES
i am writing 2 stories, one is a bout a boy who is evil.the second is one a ...more "
i am writing 2 stories, one is a bout a boy who is evil.the second is one a ...more "
chapter 1 review
Morgan
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thought it was good and short. are you going to write more? would you want to read mine?
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