One Song - The Dance (chapter 7) by ღஐღƤrιncɛss Avαℓιnɛღஐღ
chapters
chapter 1:
Different
chapter 2:
Not a Chance
chapter 3:
Hope
chapter 4:
One Song
chapter 5:
Inspiration
chapter 6:
Surprise
chapter 7:
The Dance
The Dance
chapter 7
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updated Apr 19, 2009
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“No way, Ian! I’m not going in that building.”
“Come on, Jenny. Have a little fun with your life.”
“I will have fun when you take me home!” I shrieked. It was a good thing we were the only two in the parking lot at the moment. Ian looked at me with a hurt expression. How was I supposed to compete with that? “Okay, but only for a few minutes.”
“You don’t have to Jennifer, I understand. You’re not the party king of person. I’m okay with that.”
“No, no. You go ahead and have fun.” The tears were coming. “Don’t let me ruin your Friday night.”
I didn’t want Ian to see me cry, so I turned the other direction and started walking away.
Most girls would have been hurt it their boyfriend didn’t come and comfort them right then and there, but Ian knew better and left me alone.
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I cried that night. And for the first time, it was because of a boy.
The music within me called to me. I pulled out One Song and began to play it. Fresh tears spilled onto my violin, but I kept playing. It was my drug, my comfort. Music compelled me, yet I felt as if something was missing.
Ian was too good for me. He would have to find someone else. From now on, Ian Surther was just another cellist in my Orchestra.
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“Come on, Jenny. Have a little fun with your life.”
“I will have fun when you take me home!” I shrieked. It was a good thing we were the only two in the parking lot at the moment. Ian looked at me with a hurt expression. How was I supposed to compete with that? “Okay, but only for a few minutes.”
“You don’t have to Jennifer, I understand. You’re not the party king of person. I’m okay with that.”
“No, no. You go ahead and have fun.” The tears were coming. “Don’t let me ruin your Friday night.”
I didn’t want Ian to see me cry, so I turned the other direction and started walking away.
Most girls would have been hurt it their boyfriend didn’t come and comfort them right then and there, but Ian knew better and left me alone.
***
I cried that night. And for the first time, it was because of a boy.
The music within me called to me. I pulled out One Song and began to play it. Fresh tears spilled onto my violin, but I kept playing. It was my drug, my comfort. Music compelled me, yet I felt as if something was missing.
Ian was too good for me. He would have to find someone else. From now on, Ian Surther was just another cellist in my Orchestra.
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chapter 1 review
Katie
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I thought it was pretty well written. What haappens next??? I wanna know!!!
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chapter 1 review
ღஐღArαxιαღஐღ
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OMG!!! This is great! I love it! Can't wait for more (you really have a great talent) :D
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chapter 1 review
♥κДτϊε βэαη♥
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I like how you described her eyes and her life and i love romance so i cant wait to find out who she falls for
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chapter 1 review
Genieva
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ausome story you made a few mistakes like me but everything else was just great.
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chapter 1 review
Rainrocks^o^(aka Breanna)
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pretty pretty please with a cherry on top finish this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW! *if convient:)*
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chapter 2 review
Katie
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And once more I say that you are really good at writing. I liked the line when you said that she "blushes at everything"! I think that is so…more
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chapter 2 review
ღஐღArαxιαღஐღ
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Mrs. Fishburn!!! :D
I cracked up when I saw her name.
I can't believe that you are using our orchestra teacher... and our instruments... and…more "
I cracked up when I saw her name.
I can't believe that you are using our orchestra teacher... and our instruments... and…more "
chapter 2 review
Laurena
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This story was amazing too!! What happens next? I really want to know!!
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chapter 2 review
Rainrocks^o^(aka Breanna)
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Wow! I love it! I am in band so this kinda makes me think!
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chapter 5 review
Laurena
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The first five chapters were great! Keep writing, I want to know what happens next.
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chapter 5 review
Gabaakanye
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very easy to read and it shows that it was written with deep emotions.she is right when she says people leave out love, we do yet we yearn for it day …more
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chapter 6 review
Eva Anne
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Good; I'm curious as to how the festival will play out. Get it? Play out? As in music? Oh, nevermind.
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chapter 7 review
Laurena
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Aww...Jenny doesn't think enough of herself!!! I hope everything will turn out ok!!
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chapter 7 review
{just seo} ♥
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this is really good but it would be amaaazing if it were less fastpaced
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chapter 7 review
ThatStalkerGirlBehindYouWhoIsAlsoACreeper
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Ahhhh...love and music. This is such a heart-felt story!!! I, for one, LOVE music. I also know that most of the guys I liked were in band, lol. Keep w…more
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chapter 7 review
Angelica(JonasBro's Fan!)
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Wow! This was so sweet! Put together very nicely! Great job!! Please continue!!
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