One Song - Surprise (chapter 6) by ღஐღƤrιncɛss Avαℓιnɛღஐღ
chapters
chapter 1:
Different
chapter 2:
Not a Chance
chapter 3:
Hope
chapter 4:
One Song
chapter 5:
Inspiration
chapter 6:
Surprise
chapter 7:
The Dance
Surprise
chapter 6
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updated Feb 07, 2009
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“I have another song for us to play for the festival.”
“What’s it called?” Ian asked.
“One Song,”
Ian stared at me for one second then he shrugged it off. “Who’s the composer?”
“I wrote it.”
Ian looked at me again. “When did you write it?”
“Last night.”
He just stared at me with a cryptic expression.
“Is that ok?” I asked wearily.
Ian snapped out of his trance. “Of course,” he said grinning, “is it good?”
“You’ll love it.” I exclaimed. Ian paused in thought.
***
“Where are we going?!” I asked excitedly.
“You’ll see.” I could sense the smile in his voice. This was stupid, Ian had kidnapped me from my house, blindfolded me and now I have no idea where I am! And the worst part was… I was in a mini black dress with high heels! (Don’t ask, it was my sister’s idea to wear this on my first date.)
“Ian Suther, I demand that you tell me where we are going!”
“Go ahead and take it off,” he laughed. I quickly did as he instructed. Ian was dressed in a suit and tie. “Like it?” he asked
“You look handsome.”
“You look very beautiful.” Ian responded. Then he laughed at my blush. “Come on, let’s go inside. I realized we were in the school parking lot. The “Back to School” dance! I have completely forgotten.
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“What’s it called?” Ian asked.
“One Song,”
Ian stared at me for one second then he shrugged it off. “Who’s the composer?”
“I wrote it.”
Ian looked at me again. “When did you write it?”
“Last night.”
He just stared at me with a cryptic expression.
“Is that ok?” I asked wearily.
Ian snapped out of his trance. “Of course,” he said grinning, “is it good?”
“You’ll love it.” I exclaimed. Ian paused in thought.
***
“Where are we going?!” I asked excitedly.
“You’ll see.” I could sense the smile in his voice. This was stupid, Ian had kidnapped me from my house, blindfolded me and now I have no idea where I am! And the worst part was… I was in a mini black dress with high heels! (Don’t ask, it was my sister’s idea to wear this on my first date.)
“Ian Suther, I demand that you tell me where we are going!”
“Go ahead and take it off,” he laughed. I quickly did as he instructed. Ian was dressed in a suit and tie. “Like it?” he asked
“You look handsome.”
“You look very beautiful.” Ian responded. Then he laughed at my blush. “Come on, let’s go inside. I realized we were in the school parking lot. The “Back to School” dance! I have completely forgotten.
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chapter 1 review
Katie
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I thought it was pretty well written. What haappens next??? I wanna know!!!
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chapter 1 review
ღஐღArαxιαღஐღ
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OMG!!! This is great! I love it! Can't wait for more (you really have a great talent) :D
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chapter 1 review
♥κДτϊε βэαη♥
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I like how you described her eyes and her life and i love romance so i cant wait to find out who she falls for
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chapter 1 review
Genieva
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ausome story you made a few mistakes like me but everything else was just great.
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chapter 1 review
Rainrocks^o^(aka Breanna)
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pretty pretty please with a cherry on top finish this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW! *if convient:)*
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chapter 2 review
Katie
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And once more I say that you are really good at writing. I liked the line when you said that she "blushes at everything"! I think that is so…more
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chapter 2 review
ღஐღArαxιαღஐღ
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Mrs. Fishburn!!! :D
I cracked up when I saw her name.
I can't believe that you are using our orchestra teacher... and our instruments... and…more "
I cracked up when I saw her name.
I can't believe that you are using our orchestra teacher... and our instruments... and…more "
chapter 2 review
Laurena
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This story was amazing too!! What happens next? I really want to know!!
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chapter 2 review
Rainrocks^o^(aka Breanna)
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Wow! I love it! I am in band so this kinda makes me think!
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chapter 5 review
Laurena
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The first five chapters were great! Keep writing, I want to know what happens next.
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chapter 5 review
Gabaakanye
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very easy to read and it shows that it was written with deep emotions.she is right when she says people leave out love, we do yet we yearn for it day …more
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chapter 6 review
Eva Anne
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Good; I'm curious as to how the festival will play out. Get it? Play out? As in music? Oh, nevermind.
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chapter 7 review
Laurena
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Aww...Jenny doesn't think enough of herself!!! I hope everything will turn out ok!!
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chapter 7 review
{just seo} ♥
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this is really good but it would be amaaazing if it were less fastpaced
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chapter 7 review
ThatStalkerGirlBehindYouWhoIsAlsoACreeper
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Ahhhh...love and music. This is such a heart-felt story!!! I, for one, LOVE music. I also know that most of the guys I liked were in band, lol. Keep w…more
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chapter 7 review
Angelica(JonasBro's Fan!)
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Wow! This was so sweet! Put together very nicely! Great job!! Please continue!!
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