One Song - One Song (chapter 4) by ღஐღƤrιncɛss Avαℓιnɛღஐღ
chapters
chapter 1:
Different
chapter 2:
Not a Chance
chapter 3:
Hope
chapter 4:
One Song
chapter 5:
Inspiration
chapter 6:
Surprise
chapter 7:
The Dance
One Song
chapter 4
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updated Feb 07, 2009
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“A…duet…with …you?” I repeated slowly. The words made no sense.
“For the festival,” Ian said looking confused and slightly hurt. Then it fit. Oh!
“Of course!” I confirmed before my words were thought out. Too late.
“Perfect. We’ll need to schedule practice time. How’s this Thursday at five?”
“Fine with me”
Ian smiled the most dazzling smile. It all but knocked me off of my feet.
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“Shall we?” he asked.
“Let’s,” I confirmed, raising my violin to my shoulder. I accidentally met his glare. We held it for a moment, but I turned away, reddening. His eyes were blue.
Ian counted us off. The piece started gently and dolce, but gradually grew dramatic. His part skimmed in range under my sob. The music came naturally to my fingers. I barely looked at the notes.
Our parts were different, but they flowed together flawlessly. Together, they were one song.
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“For the festival,” Ian said looking confused and slightly hurt. Then it fit. Oh!
“Of course!” I confirmed before my words were thought out. Too late.
“Perfect. We’ll need to schedule practice time. How’s this Thursday at five?”
“Fine with me”
Ian smiled the most dazzling smile. It all but knocked me off of my feet.
***
“Shall we?” he asked.
“Let’s,” I confirmed, raising my violin to my shoulder. I accidentally met his glare. We held it for a moment, but I turned away, reddening. His eyes were blue.
Ian counted us off. The piece started gently and dolce, but gradually grew dramatic. His part skimmed in range under my sob. The music came naturally to my fingers. I barely looked at the notes.
Our parts were different, but they flowed together flawlessly. Together, they were one song.
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chapter 1 review
Katie
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I thought it was pretty well written. What haappens next??? I wanna know!!!
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chapter 1 review
ღஐღArαxιαღஐღ
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OMG!!! This is great! I love it! Can't wait for more (you really have a great talent) :D
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chapter 1 review
♥κДτϊε βэαη♥
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I like how you described her eyes and her life and i love romance so i cant wait to find out who she falls for
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chapter 1 review
Genieva
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ausome story you made a few mistakes like me but everything else was just great.
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chapter 1 review
Rainrocks^o^(aka Breanna)
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pretty pretty please with a cherry on top finish this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW! *if convient:)*
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chapter 2 review
Katie
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And once more I say that you are really good at writing. I liked the line when you said that she "blushes at everything"! I think that is so…more
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chapter 2 review
ღஐღArαxιαღஐღ
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Mrs. Fishburn!!! :D
I cracked up when I saw her name.
I can't believe that you are using our orchestra teacher... and our instruments... and…more "
I cracked up when I saw her name.
I can't believe that you are using our orchestra teacher... and our instruments... and…more "
chapter 2 review
Laurena
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This story was amazing too!! What happens next? I really want to know!!
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chapter 2 review
Rainrocks^o^(aka Breanna)
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Wow! I love it! I am in band so this kinda makes me think!
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chapter 5 review
Laurena
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The first five chapters were great! Keep writing, I want to know what happens next.
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chapter 5 review
Gabaakanye
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very easy to read and it shows that it was written with deep emotions.she is right when she says people leave out love, we do yet we yearn for it day …more
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chapter 6 review
Eva Anne
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Good; I'm curious as to how the festival will play out. Get it? Play out? As in music? Oh, nevermind.
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chapter 7 review
Laurena
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Aww...Jenny doesn't think enough of herself!!! I hope everything will turn out ok!!
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chapter 7 review
{just seo} ♥
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this is really good but it would be amaaazing if it were less fastpaced
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chapter 7 review
ThatStalkerGirlBehindYouWhoIsAlsoACreeper
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Ahhhh...love and music. This is such a heart-felt story!!! I, for one, LOVE music. I also know that most of the guys I liked were in band, lol. Keep w…more
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chapter 7 review
Angelica(JonasBro's Fan!)
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Wow! This was so sweet! Put together very nicely! Great job!! Please continue!!
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