One Song - One Song (chapter 4) by ღஐღƤrιncɛss Avαℓιnɛღஐღ

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This is the story of a girl who didn't know her place in the world. Her only comfort and love was music. Everything changed when she found the perfect boy, a boy who loved music and a fragile heart...



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chapter 1: Different

chapter 2: Not a Chance

chapter 3: Hope

chapter 4: One Song

chapter 5: Inspiration

chapter 6: Surprise

chapter 7: The Dance


One Song
chapter 4   —   updated Feb 07, 2009   —   912 characters   —   55 people liked this writing   —   38 reviews of this writing
“A…duet…with …you?” I repeated slowly. The words made no sense.
“For the festival,” Ian said looking confused and slightly hurt. Then it fit. Oh!
“Of course!” I confirmed before my words were thought out. Too late.
“Perfect. We’ll need to schedule practice time. How’s this Thursday at five?”
“Fine with me”
Ian smiled the most dazzling smile. It all but knocked me off of my feet.

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“Shall we?” he asked.
“Let’s,” I confirmed, raising my violin to my shoulder. I accidentally met his glare. We held it for a moment, but I turned away, reddening. His eyes were blue.
Ian counted us off. The piece started gently and dolce, but gradually grew dramatic. His part skimmed in range under my sob. The music came naturally to my fingers. I barely looked at the notes.
Our parts were different, but they flowed together flawlessly. Together, they were one song.
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ღஐღArαxιαღஐღ said:
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" I like how you described her eyes and her life and i love romance so i cant wait to find out who she falls for "
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ღஐღArαxιαღஐღ said:
" Mrs. Fishburn!!! :D
I cracked up when I saw her name.
I can't believe that you are using our orchestra teacher... and our instruments... and…more "
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Laurena said:
" This story was amazing too!! What happens next? I really want to know!! "
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" Nice beginning. "
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" very easy to read and it shows that it was written with deep emotions.she is right when she says people leave out love, we do yet we yearn for it day …more "
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Eva Anne said:
" Good; I'm curious as to how the festival will play out. Get it? Play out? As in music? Oh, nevermind. "
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" this is really good but it would be amaaazing if it were less fastpaced "
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" This is really good, but no happy ending???? "
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ThatStalkerGirlBehindYouWhoIsAlsoACreeper said:
" Ahhhh...love and music. This is such a heart-felt story!!! I, for one, LOVE music. I also know that most of the guys I liked were in band, lol. Keep w…more "
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" Wow! This was so sweet! Put together very nicely! Great job!! Please continue!! "
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Sharleen said:
" and then ....


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