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More to Roaches than Meets the Eyes - None by Lucille

by Lucille
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In honor to the existence of Roaches in this world



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chapter 1   —   updated Mar 21, 2009   —   1193 characters   —   9 people liked this writing   —   9 reviews of this writing
I look down and I see.
The most loathsome creature for me:
A roach crawling on the ground,
Did not think that it is found.

I pound hard till I think it dead.
To my amazement, it continues to tread.
Then suddenly, I begin to perceive.
That all along, I was wrong to believe.

Ants teach us diligence.
Flies bring us pestilence.
Rats are our guinea pig.
But what is a cockroach's sig?

You see, I often ponder on their purpose.
Other than disgust people, they just find clothes delicious.
They leave marks on my clothes with holes.
Oh God, I want to smash them with poles!

But at that moment when I witness,
Its entrails ooze out and make a mess.
Still, it continues to live, breathe and have its being.
Inch by inch, striving.

It hit me like a lightning bolt.
These creatures are not easily put to a halt.
They have a Never-Say-Die Attitude.
To me, it’s a lesson in life of the first magnitude.

I don’t look down on Cockroaches anymore.
It doesn’t mean, not killing them when I see them on the floor.
It’s just that I respect and honor God for their existence.
They have taught me an as-long-as-you-have-breath-you-can-make-it kind of persistence.
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Saved By Grace said:
" Great rhyming. :) "
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Mary Anne said:
" Hahahaha it's so cute, Lu :)) I would've never thought of writing about roaches. "
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Seth said:
" This is way good and you have grrreat ryming skills "
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Maryse said:
" Never thought roaches could be philosophical, but you pulled it off. :) "
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Richard said:
" Dear Lucille,
You show an astonishing insight in this poem. This makes it not only memorable, but valuable. It's an absolute delight to read --...more "
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Joy H. (of Glens Falls) said:
" Hi Lucille - What an interesting approach! I had no idea where your poem was going until I got near the end. Ah, yes, a great lesson indeed! A clever ...more "
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Marco said:
" I've just had a love-the-last-line feeling! "
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Joyzi said:
" Wow I like it, eventhough I hate roaches ^^. I hope I have your skill in poetry. "
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Shymoon said:
" gah... cockroaches.. but it is so true "
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