Life Of Death - Chapter One by Seth M

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My fingers now ripped into the ground fiercely, tearing out all of the grass within a five feet diameter of the grave. Ten feet. Twenty feet. Now I started to dig. My nail polish never came off, it was designed to withstand this, because this is how we had to do dig the person out from the grave. Girls who care about getting dirt under your fingernails, never apply for this job, even if it was a job that you could apply to (and just for the record, you can’t.) I tore at the ground until I am upon something hard and wooden. Please keep in mind that I wasn’t in my right state of mind while doing this, and everything was against my own will. I didn’t want to do any of it. It was illegal to resurrect when you don’t have a job, and I could lose my job for it. But I littarilly couldn’t help myself.

Then, of course, it took no strength at all to lift the huge casket out. I had all of the strength in the world, because I was a different person. A different person that was a lot stronger than my old self, at that. I heaved the casket next to me and slowly opened it with a strong tug. His face was so beautiful, and I instantly fell in love with him. Or rather, whoever I was at that time instantly fell in love with him. Then I gave him a little prick on the four head. It was better than any other resurrecting had ever felt. It was amazing. Watching the flow of blood pigment his pale skin was remarkable. Everything about this one was remarkable. “Peyton,” I whispered, leaning into his chest just as his eyes opened.
She can bring people back. But when she brings someone back that she wasn't assigned to him and automatically falls head over heels for him, what will happen?

Meanwhile, the doctor is stirring up a plan of his own . . . And Tempus hardly knows it.



chapters

chapter 1: Chapter One

chapter 2: Chapter Two

chapter 4: Chapter Four

chapter 5: Chapter Five

chapter 6: Chapter Six

chapter 7: Chapter Seven

chapter 8: Chapter Eight

chapter 9: Chapter Nine

chapter 10: Chapter Ten

chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen


Chapter One
chapter 1   —   updated Apr 16, 2009   —   8846 characters   —   97 people liked this writing   —   77 reviews of this writing
Tempus Fidgets
Chapter One
My nails were almost finished. I hated getting manicures; they were quite annoying, but he said that the silver only looked good with another color. I had chose a dark maroon, and the male manicurist said that it looked orange over my light silver. I could never understand what was the thing about guy people who painted nails. I mean, isn’t that for girls? I felt more comfortable with other girls painting my nails. Well, technically, I didn’t like anyone to paint my nails. Not even myself. I was never a “girly” type of girl. I didn’t ever mind it, but I didn’t see why they had to put the most advanced technology in nail polish. It was probably the most inconspicuous. No one would think that we had special powers because of silver nail polish.

I always wished that they would have told us how they did it. All we knew, was that when someone was dead, if they were touched with the nail where the nail polish was applied, it would somehow jumpstart their heart. Sure, we got paid a really good amount. We get about six people per day about five hundred dollars per person. I just didn’t see any reason in it. People were supposed to die. Why was I picked as one of the few who were supposed to disrupt that? I didn’t mind much, it had just been bugging me lately. And I got a free apartment and free food. So all of that money that I get for resurrecting goes for stuff that I really don’t even need. Usually that is on clothes and unnecessary jewelry that Mark keeps telling me to get. He says that it makes me look more normal.

Who is Mark, you may be asking? He is one of my fellow resurrecters, and the one who referred me to them. We had been friends in Arizona and he moved to Virginia when we were still in Middle School. That was three years ago, when I was thirteen and he was twelve. The resurrecters took him away two years later, when he was fourteen. When he heard news of me running away, he told them about me. They came to the small town in Arizona called Mesa and took me to Reston, Virginia. At first I thought that I was being kidnaped, because they hadn’t told me anything on the way there. The first thing that they did was take me to Mark, in hopes that he could calm me down. They asked me weird questions on the plane ride. (They brought me there in a private jet!) They were questions like “What do you want to be when you grow up?” and “Do you believe that you are here to save people?”. I had no idea what they wanted from me, or my answers, so I kept my mouth shut. When they brought me to Mark, I felt relieved. It seemed that he wasn’t about to explain anything either, because he started to ask me some of the same questions.

Then, one of the people that I had rode with in the plane came in. As he tried to explain everything to me, I was surprised. I was sure that they could both see it in my face. “It is hard to comprehend at first, but after a while it starts to make sense,” Mark mumbled quietly.

“No, Mark, it doesn’t make sense at all! People are supposed to die when it is their time,” I tried to explain how I was feeling, but it wasn’t working, “Why would you take someone away from that? Nobody wants to live forever.”

“Over time, you will find that very untrue,” the man from the jet stated, “Everyone tells us how glad they are when we resurrect them.”

“Well, I am sorry, but this job isn’t for me. I would like to go home now, if you don’t mind,” I croaked, trying to push the man out of the way.

“I’m afraid that you already know too much, Tempus. You are with us now,” he said patiently. I glared at Mark and said,

“Why did you do this to me? I liked my life how it was, not with you ruining it for me.” I kept glaring at him for a few more seconds when the man grabbed me by the arms and pushed me out of the room.

“Sorry,” Mark cried, “I thought that you would want this. To be here. To be with me.”

So that is how this whole resurrecting buisness started for me. By now, I had forgiven Mark, but I still think that its wrong to do what we do. I couldn’t stop it now for two reasons. 1) As you know, I know too much. 2) The smiles from the family that you get when you bring home the not-so-dead-anymore body.

So I stayed. I didn’t nessisarily mind doing it anymore, and it WAS a great way to make money. Seeing Mark again was also a plus. The biggest minus for me, was the parents. I know, I know. I ran away. I shouldn’t miss them. But I do. More than anything. If I could just see the smile on my mom’s face again, or have another one of those comforting hugs from dad, I would be happier to be here. But I hadn’t had one of those. For almost two years. I wrote a letter a while back. Here is what it said:

Dear Parents,
I love you. I miss you. But I can’t see you anymore. And I can’t tell you why, and its really bugging me. My only wish now is for you two to realize that I am perfectly safe, and am doing good in the world. Its okay if you hate me now for leaving. I wouldn’t blame you. In fact, I would hate me too.
Tell Krissa that I love her and miss her too. I’m not sure if Terren will even remember me, but tell her that I love her more than anything in the world. I’ve got to go now. Please, please write back to the address on the envelope.


Love,
Tempus Fidgets


My only regret at sending this simple letter, is that I didn’t get a letter back. I thought that they had always loved me. But in sending this letter, I found that I had no ties anywhere but here.

“That would be fifty dollars please,” I heard someone say as I was shook back into reality.

“Fifty?” I asked.

“Yes, Mam,” the man answered suspiciously, as if he thought I didn’t have enough money. I reached into my pocket and grabbed my wallet and gave him a fifty dollar tip. “It was only fifty dollars,” he questioned. Then I winked at him and left. I hated to dazzle people like that, but I was getting too annoyed and I was sure that I would have taken my extra money back soon anyway. My usual Nail Salon was in the middle of a strip mall, with tons of other stores. My favorites were “Dollar Tree” (Even with raking in three thousand bucks a day!), J C Penny and Aeropastale.

At that particular moment, I didn’t want to go to any of them. I wanted to go home and sleep. It had been a long day. But I knew that I wouldn’t do that. I would go to see Mark, and see if he had any new jobs. And if he did, I would go with him. Because that is what I usually do. Can’t do anything about it. Not that I necessarily wanted to go with him, it was just that I knew that I wouldn’t be able to sleep and that spending time with Mark is a lot of fun, after having not seen him for so long. He had just got back from a two month trip. Because we were the only resurrecting group out there, we had to go all over the world sometimes for a job. His just happened to be a lot of jobs and took two months.

So then next thing I did was call Mark. I pulled out my cell phone and pressed 2. That was his speed-dial. It rang a few times until he answered.

“Hello?” he coughed.

“Did you get another cold, Mark?” I asked.

“You know me too well. So what’s up?” he said.

“Well, I was wondering . . .” I mumbled, “If you had a job today. Because if you do, I would really want to go. I haven’t seen you for two months!”

“Yeah, I have one at three o’clock. Its at the Arlington Cemetery. You ever been there?” he grumbled.

“Yeah, I think I have. Do you have an adult or a baby? I heard everyone in that cemetery is, like, hundreds of years old. What family wants people who are way old to be brought back from the dead?” I asked.

“It was a special request from the doctor. Apparently he has family who were just recently buried there. And as you know, we aren’t allowed to resurrect family members. They aren’t supposed to know that we do this,” he replied.

“I didn’t know he had family,” I wondered aloud.

“His cousin just died in the Iraq war or something like that. I don’t remember all of the details he gave me,” he said.

“Oh, well okay. Maybe you should ask him. Tell me when we meet up at the cemetery!” I shrieked involuntarily, “Bye.”

“Bye, see you at three,” he said as he hung up the phone and I heard a loud BEEP! In my ear.

“That was a very . . . interesting conversation,” I muttered to myself, “Mark is definitely hiding something from me. I can feel it. But there are still two questions. Why would he hide anything from me? And the second is, What would, or could, he possibly be hiding from me?” After this, I got some very random stares from some random people.
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" wow seth! great! i really like it; especially the dialogue. :D "
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Ephona (中村 Nakamura 久美子 Kumiko) said:
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Jay-wa said:
" She kind of reminds me of Max (as in Maximum Ride) with the random stares.. "
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" its pretty good! and yes she does remind me of max "
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Marisol said:
" Hmm... quite a good idea, but I don't get the thing with the nail polish, and a little more emotions from her are good. Pretty cool, though. "
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" Heck Yeah! Its an awsome plot and the whole mysterious sciece fiction about it is cool! "
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" Hooked, sci-fi isn't really my thing but it is fun to read. I want to know more. You've got something great going here!! "
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" Well Done Seth :] "
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" its really good keep writing more "
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" interesting... "
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" AWESOME seth you are such a good writer!!Keep it up! "
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" This first chapter was GREAT! :D "
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" i think it sounds like that "Uglies" series a little bit. not the idea but the whole "my job is a secret, i dazzle people, blah blah th…more "
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Brooke said:
" thats amazing! you should get it published! "
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" yay!! "
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" this chapter is even better than the first!! so so good!! i love how you're able to sneak humor into it. XD "
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" lol. luv it! :D "
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T.O.L.I. said:
" Great seth! and funny! "
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Kenzie said:
" Seth you did an amazing job! This story is so cool! I love the whole idea!

One thing, if they bring people back with nail polish, does that…more "
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♥ Tink ♥ (Paige) said:
" I really like it so far, but I'm only on Chapter 2. It's very suspenseful! Here are some typos I found in chapter 2:

As he may realize now, t…more "
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" Even I had never had enough to go to the white house, accept when I was in Middle School my school got a huge discount because someone’s mom was the…more "
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Michelle said:
" haha, i just realized i read this the other day and failed to comment on it. my apologies.

not to mention the suspense!! "
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Kenzie said:
" Hmmm ... I'm not sure about this chapter, only because it doesn't seem like a girl would overreact like this.

Maybe it's just your characte…more "
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Jay-wa said:
" It all kind of feels rushed, good but rushed. (it probably feels rushed because of your deadline but..ya know.) "
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Marisol said:
" What does Tempus look like? "
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" *laughs* wiki page....lol! "
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Michelle said:
" same for this one, haha.

anyway! its really good, and i was just wondering when she's going to find out whats going on? b/c i really want t…more "
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Madeline said:
" Same here. i read them but did not comment. i really like it. not only do i want to know what Mark is hiding but i wanna know when she reserects the d…more "
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♥ Brigid ♥ said:
" coolio! :D "
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Sella said:
" whats going on?? the suspense is killing me!! "
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Jay-wa said:
" He obviously hadn’t expected me to catch on.

“You catch on easily,” he said, reading my mind as he occasionally did, “How did you fin…more "
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" ok...give me more... "
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♥ Tink ♥ (Paige) said:
" Okay, more spell checks....

But I was sure that the doctor wouldn’t mind. He might with someone else, but even in that case, it wouldn’t …more "
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Marisol said:
" you should give her more emotions. "
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Madeline said:
" I like it. many many lies. still waiting fr her un-assigned lover to come in.... "
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Kenzie said:
" You have a nack for suspense! This is really great.

Sure, there's a few spelling mistakes here and there, and some grammar issues. But the …more "
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Jay-wa said:
" “Tempus,” I said absentmindedly, trying to still focus on the road while keeping this Jeck character in line. He seemed to be doing better than ju…more "
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Sella said:
" whats going on?? whats up with the doctor?? this is so good. :D "
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♥ Rachel♥ said:
" OMG THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i like jeck...XD "
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♥ Tink ♥ (Paige) said:
" Oooh..... suspensful. Who is Jeck???? hmmmm....

Spell Check:
It gave me an awed sense of Deja Vu, and I hated it Deja Vu.

No i…more "
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Marisol said:
" oooh. SUspense. She should just go scream at the doctor or something. Why would he have a fake person resurected? "
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" love it! "
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Sella said:
" i dont like her parents..lol. good so far! :D "
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Kenzie said:
" I love this story. Great job! I really like the style, too. You've done a great job writing like a girl so far(getting into ones head, I mean), keep i…more "
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Madeline said:
" i still like it! that african kid was random but i've accepted it. "
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Jay-wa said:
" It's pretty intense... "
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♥ Rachel♥ said:
" the african kid was random but wat evs. it's good. "
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" she should be alittle more emotional... and also, it seems unlikely taht they would move, because often parents hope their kids will come back to that…more "
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♥ Tink ♥ (Paige) said:
" "Then, they took me to a building, and showed me and old friend."
And should be an

All she had ever done for Mark was be a go…more "
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♥ Tink ♥ (Paige) said:
" I they wanted was to hear stories from life in Washington D.C.

Insert THINK between I and They.

also...

She just stuck her …more "
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Kenzie said:
" A few spelling mistakes here and there, and gramatical errors, but very nice!

Ha, ha. I kinda feel bad for Peyton. What if he didn't want t…more "
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Olivia said:
" This is really good!!! So interesting!!! CONTINUE it!!! A couple spelling and grammatical mistakes, but very good! "
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" *groan* she is in SO MUCH TROUBLE. "
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Kenzie said:
" GAH! I just typed up this long review and then the thing messed up and it showed up as, "Kenzie liked it." I'll try and sum it up.

…more "
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T.O.L.I. said:
" AHHHHHHHH!!!!! and tempus got really close to peyton all of a sudden... "
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Kenzie said:
" Whoa....

Give me a few minutes as I digest all this.

*digesting*

*digesting*

*digesting*

Okay. …more "
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♥ Tink ♥ (Paige) said:
" YAY YOU ADDED MORE!!!!

If I may comment, it was a little weird that Peyton suddenly just accepted that he had been dead and this weird person…more "
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Margaret said:
" First off, I think you need a prologue of some type to set up the reason for her story. I did notice several errors, but these are easily fixed. With …more "
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Sella said:
" oh god, this is depressing! :( "
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T.O.L.I. said:
" depressing much?? "
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♥ Tink ♥ (Paige) said:
" I like the new chapter... good work. "
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chapter 13 review
T.O.L.I. said:
" AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! "
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♥ Brigid ♥ said:
" oh nooo!! that's so sad!! :( but anyway ... SEE -- I READ IT!!!! ^^ it's good! i like your use of dialogue ... it's cool. :) "
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Kenzie said:
" ...

...

...

...

...

I was NOT expecting that.

Nice twist, sad, but still, a good twi…more "
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Margaret said:
" This gives good closure to your previous chapters. Nice twist. Very curious as to what will happen next!?! "
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Sella said:
" oh no!!! why is he dead?!?! :( "
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chapter 14 review
Sella said:
" this is good...except, it seems like peyton's and tempus's relationship is moving too fast...i mean, just a day or less ago, they met, and now they're…more "
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Kenzie said:
" Awe, that sucks about Mark. :(

LOL, Peyton and Tempus are cool together. "
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Kenzie said:
" Oooch. That's gotta hurt Peyton's hand.

New York, hmm ... I've never been there either. I've heard it's nice, though.

Ooh! She s…more "
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Sella said:
" NOOOOOOOOO!!!! STUPID DOCTOR!!!! GO DIE!!! AND HOW DARE YOU KILL MARK AGAIN!!!! 0.0 "
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Shruti said:
" the Doctor is kinda messed up... "
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Kenzie said:
" What?! He's dead AGAIN!! Dumb doctor! Go fall in a hole or something!!! "
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Sarah said:
" I LOVE this story!!! Its spectactular!!! please please please write more soon!! "
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Hasna said:
" WOW!!!!! "
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