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Winner of the Goodreads Poetry Contest, December 2011
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Published on 2011-12-02 · 2 total people like it


Chapter 1   —   Updated Dec 02, 2011   —   577 characters
The sun was hotter.
You can tell.
Look at us squinting against it in photos then.
Everything washed out by the glare,
cheekbones, jawlines,
all detail surrendered.
Dazzled,
we could be anybody.

The gardens, look, they’re parched.
It hurt to walk on the grass.
We lay in scorched backyards
slathering butter on our chests,
chain-smoking, eating fluorescent cheesies,
swilling scarlet soda,
everyone burned red raw.

Oblivious,unformed,
we felt nothing could go wrong.
Our lives lay ahead of us.
Men were above us,
landing on the moon.



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message 1: by Gorfo (new)

Gorfo "all detail surrendered" favorite line for some reason :)


message 2: by John (new)

John Cobb First stanza is captivating! How it ends with "Dazzled, we could be anybody." is a great line.
Also like the time period you give us at the last line.


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