~Red~ - =Chapter 1= by ♥ Brigid ♥

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A dark, modern fairy tale about a girl named Zoë Drake, whose destiny is to defeat the Wolves. If you want to know more, well, READ! ;D



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chapter 1: =Chapter 1=

chapter 2: =Chapter 2=

chapter 3: =Chapter 3=


=Chapter 1=
chapter 1   —   updated Apr 07, 2009   —   3374 characters   —   64 people liked this writing   —   44 reviews of this writing
Quick -- think of your worst fear. If that’s too hard, you can start small if you want to. Maybe you’re afraid of spiders. Or you’re afraid of the dark. Everyone is afraid of something.

Think about it. Reach deep down into your mind, and find your darkest memories. Think of those horrible moments when you felt hopeless, isolated, terrified. Then think about what made you feel that way.

It’s all right, now. You can take as much time as you want. But don’t take too long, because I’d like to move on with this story as soon as possible.

Are you ready now?

Good.

Keep thinking about that worst fear. Imagine that you are facing it at this very moment, and that there is no possible way to escape. Do you feel that ominous tingle creeping up your spine? Do you feel the goosebumps rising on your skin? Do you feel your heartbeat accelerate, and your breathing go shallow?

Now, while you’re imagining that feeling of absolute terror, imagine it multiplied by -- oh, I don’t know. A million? And I promise you: that is how afraid I feel whenever I face my worst fear.

So, I assume that you’re wondering three things by now: why I’m making you do this, what my worst fear is, and lastly, who I am.

Let’s start with that first question. Why am I doing this? Why am I making you think of your worst fear? Because once this story’s out, I want you to think about this fear of yours again, and consider whether it is truly frightening or not. After I tell you my tale, probably a good deal of you -- all of you people out there who are reading this -- will change your minds, and realize that you don’t have all that much to be afraid of. And maybe next time you come face-to-face with your fear, it won’t scare you as much anymore. I guess you could say that I’m trying to make you a more courageous person.

Moving on.

As I mentioned, you’re probably also dying to know what my worst fear is. After all, it’s only fair. I made you tell me yours, and now I have to tell you mine.

Here goes. My worst fear is ... the Wolves.

This is the part where you’re thinking to yourself: Wolves? That’s a normal enough fear. What’s so terrifying about wolves?

But that’s because you’re picturing those ordinary, oversized puppy dogs.

See, those are nothing compared to the Wolves that I’m talking about. I’m not talking about anything normal, or about anything that even belongs in this world. I’m talking about demons.

I guess I’m getting a little ahead of myself, though. Let me go back for a second and explain this.

Yes, the Wolves vaguely resemble the normal kind. There are just a few key differences. First of all, they’re larger. Secondly, they’re stronger. They also have retractable claws, as sharp as knives, and piercing, blood-red eyes. Oh, and they can talk. And when they speak, their rasping voices are enough to give you nightmares for the rest of your life.

I think that’s about as much as I can say about the Wolves for now, in a few short words. Although, there’s one other thing that I should probably mention.

Apparently, it’s my destiny to defeat them.

Now, I guess that leads us to our last question: Who am I?

My name is Zoë Drake. That’s all I can tell you for now. If you want to know more -- well then, keep reading.

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Seth said:
" Its okay, Zoe! I will definately keep reading! Good job! "
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T.O.L.I. said:
" Brigid!!!!! better than shades I need more, i just cant believe how flawless ur writing is!!! "
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Sella said:
" Wow!! Intriguing!! And really great voice in this chapter!! I'm off to read more! XD "
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Logan--Mitch said:
" Wow! I love your story! You are really good! =] "
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Shelleyhw said:
" That is very intriguing. I've only read the first chapter but I'll certainly be reading more. "
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~Clare~ said:
" Whoa! Awesome!! "
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☼~Zoeee~☼ said:
" i'm scared for Zoe cause thats my name! "
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Weird-Nate said:
" I don't know you but that's a very good start! "
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Victor said:
" nice, keep writing "
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call me crazy and be done with it. said:
" Wow! you have alot of great personality! you catch the reader right from the begining! "
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*Hannah* said:
" LOVE IT!!!!!!!! "
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Al said:
" Very good! :D "
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CAROLINE ♥ Hate cannot drive out hate, said:
" Nice work, keep going!!!! "
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ayundabhuwana said:
" wow, great beginning!! "
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♦♥Snow☺♥☺Storm♥♦ said:
" To me I don't really like it that much since, My favorite animal is a wolf and us talking about defeating them, Isn't that like, Killing them? "
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Audrey said:
" very captivating "
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Annie said:
" love it, just like all of your stories Brigid! Good luck with Reborn! "
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Tigerstarz said:
" WoW!
This is really good!
I love your style- it's very descriptive- and the whole chapter is a great hook! "
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Jack said:
" Great beginning! You always know just how to start! The first sentence is very important because, if you don't do it right, the reader will lose inter…more "
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T.O.L.I. said:
" chapter three here i come..... "
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Seth said:
" Hmmm . . . I think that I like Shades and Reborn better than this one. I see where you are going with it too. I'm pretty sure its Lil Red Riding Hood …more "
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Sella said:
" OMG!!!! Red riding hood!!! XD "
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*Lunabell* said:
" I COMPLETELY TOTALLY LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR WRITING, BRIGID!!! I'LL BE THE FIRST TO READ YOUR BOOKS WHEN THEY GET PUBLISHED!!! "
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~Clare~ said:
" OMG!!!! I'm already in LOVE with this story!!! I have an obsession for little red riding hood (That is what this story is kinda about right?) I don't …more "
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Al said:
" Wow, it's great so far! I do think I like Injection better, but that's just the type of thing I like to read. You definately are a great writer! :D "
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" this story keeps getting better and better "
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Kjersti but you can call me Captain said:
" Very great. I agree with Seth, it has the ring of Lil' Red, but I'm interested to see where you take it. And I just wanted to say, when you were descr…more "
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Seth said:
" Please write more. This is a really interesting story "
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T.O.L.I. said:
" ok confuzzlement, is this little red riding hood? well ok please write more...its interesting! "
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Ashe said:
" really interesting- can't wait to read more! "
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Sella said:
" Ooooh! I NEED MORE!! So so so good!! XD "
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Sofia said:
" Keep on writing! I is extremely intriguing... "
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Mama~3mily~Shea said:
" This story's amazing! When you're done, you should seriously think about getting it published! "
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Kalifornia said:
" This is awesome!
I totally like it!
[: "
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~Clare~ said:
" WHOA!! In breathless need for more!!! "
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♥ Rachel♥ said:
" suspence... "
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CAROLINE ♥ Hate cannot drive out hate, said:
" Brigid.......your writing doesn't deserve a clap, it deserves an applause. Brilliant work...that's all I have to say.... :) "
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Shruti said:
" interesting... "
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Michelle said:
" can't wait to read more. your writing is incredible! "
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jellybe[an]stripe said:
" I want to read more of Zoë's story! "
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Audrey said:
" where is the next chapter? I am dying for more. "
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Jenny said:
" i get it now! little red riding hood!! Please write more, it's really interesting. "
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Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ oıɔoɹ/rocio Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ said:
" wow this is rly good! pls write more! "
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Tigerstarz said:
" This is really awesome!
I can't wait until you write more! "
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