The Heavens
by Naomi
genre:
Poetry
description:
I just typed this up. Most of the time I write it from my Notepad thing, but this time, I just typed it up on here!! I am so proud.
chapters
chapter 1:
Moon
chapter 2:
Sun
chapter 3:
Stars
Moon
chapter 1
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updated 10/11/08
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5 people liked it
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I watch the moon disappear from my sight.
It fades from view as if embarrassed of being so open.
So open to our eyes. So naked.
The clouds are like clothes for it.
They cover, yet shine like a beautiful cloth.
They are like a sweeping dress.
My eyes cower behind magnified vision.
They are colored with fake sight.
They see the moon falsely.
They know not the true beauty of the moon.
They know not of the sweep of the clouds.
They know of this, that the moon is beautiful, even in false light.
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It fades from view as if embarrassed of being so open.
So open to our eyes. So naked.
The clouds are like clothes for it.
They cover, yet shine like a beautiful cloth.
They are like a sweeping dress.
My eyes cower behind magnified vision.
They are colored with fake sight.
They see the moon falsely.
They know not the true beauty of the moon.
They know not of the sweep of the clouds.
They know of this, that the moon is beautiful, even in false light.
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chapter 1 review
Psyc94
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The essence of the dark can shine a beauty in us all...really impressive, Naomi.
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