The good friends

by Allison
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genre: Romance
description:
A 9th grade girl, Samantha (nickname=Sam) begins to spend more time with her good friend (Peter) and begins to think if there is something more than just friendship she's feeling. He tells her that he's going to ask another girl out... what is she to do? She's stuck asking herself about her friendship with Peter... meanwhile... Sam is getting some love letters in her locker...who are THEY from?


chapters

chapter 1: Good Friends

chapter 2: The bus ride

chapter 4: Walking home

chapter 5: Life at Home

chapter 6: Chatting

chapter 8: Locker Notes

chapter 9: No concentration


Good Friends
chapter 1   —   updated 11/15/08   —   1539 characters   —   14 people liked it   —   10 reviews
"Hey Sam!"
"Hey Peter!"
Peter and Sam are good friends. They've known each other since second grade. They always talk to eachother about everything! Their grades, their favorite sports, their favorite teachers, and even their love life's...
Sam was touched her cheak... it felt hot...warm. She didn't understand, this was Peter she was talking to, she only felt like this when she was talking to her...crush.

"Hey, did you know that the next dance is going to be next Friday?" Peter said happily.
Sam felt hotter...
"Really?" Sam choked out "That's cool."
"Do you think your going?" He asked.
Sam felt her heart beat faster...like she might pass out...
"I don't know..." she said with a little sweat running down the back of her neck "why do you ask?"
"I don't know just wondering...hey do you know a girl named Jacky Ling?"
Her heart stoped. Jacky Ling, the girl she sat next to in Sience class, 2nd period.
"Yeah..." she responded

"Hey Petter!" Peter turned and looked across the street from the crowded school that had just got out. His mother was in a black volvo, waving at him. "Come on! We gotta get you to soccer practice!" she said.
"Well, I'll tell you about it later... I really gotta go! See ya tomarrow!" He said in his sweet, happy voice.
"See ya.." Sam murmured.
After Peter left Sam turned around and touched her hand to the back of her wet neck. Oh, my, gosh... Peter is just my good friend...
wait...
do I like, like him???
(to be continued...)
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chapter 1 review
Melv said:
" (thumbs up) "

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Michael said:
" Great job of describing emotions! "

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chapter 3 review
Sam said:
" AWESOME!!!!! "

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chapter 6 review
Sam said:
" i do NOT do dat alli
i'm offended
:( "

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chapter 6 review
Priyam said:
" even if you change the name chapter 2 still says Amy. haha! I can't believe you included my bit of drama! But Bri would TOTALLY not do that "

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chapter 7 review
Sam said:
" great job! "

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chapter 8 review
Priyam said:
" WOW! Sam is sooooooo lucky! I wish I got that note. :)

You just got me really interested in this. Great job! "

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chapter 8 review
Sam said:
" maybe thats how i'll word mine.... but dunno yet
:D
good job! "

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chapter 9 review
Sam said:
" good job!
i'm guessing SHristine is Rebecca? "

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chapter 9 review
Priyam said:
" lol, mcintyre's "homework"

I totally know who Lana is. Her practically screaming/cheerful voice creeps me out too... "

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