My Way of Thinking
by Psyc94 Crimson-Scourge
genre:
Poetry
description:
For some reason I'm thinking these would be good as songs...I doubt it's a good thing...
chapters
chapter 1:
Try - The Dead Path
chapter 2:
Try - The Better Path
chapter 3:
Silence - The Outside
chapter 4:
Silence - The Inside
chapter 5:
Power - Physical
chapter 6:
Power - Mental
chapter 7:
Summary
chapter 8:
Bonus: The Past
Try - The Dead Path
chapter 1
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updated 10/26/08
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Try and block me,
Try and stop me.
Try and push me,
Try and break me.
If you can,
I pity you.
If you can't,
I'm proud of you.
Try and take me,
From the inside-out.
Try and blow me away,
From your weak breath.
I will grab my words,
And shoot them down.
I will grab my emotions,
And split them in half.
I will grab my soul,
And form the energy,
That will always be,
Forever unlimited.
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Try and stop me.
Try and push me,
Try and break me.
If you can,
I pity you.
If you can't,
I'm proud of you.
Try and take me,
From the inside-out.
Try and blow me away,
From your weak breath.
I will grab my words,
And shoot them down.
I will grab my emotions,
And split them in half.
I will grab my soul,
And form the energy,
That will always be,
Forever unlimited.
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chapter 1 review
James
said:
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wow that was very good., but do you mean "i will grab your words" instead of "ill grab my words"?
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chapter 1 review
Fastgirl
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wow! you are amazing! ive hadn"t heard of anything like that great description of poetic writing! plz write more! you are so good you should writ...more
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chapter 1 review
Andre
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Your writing is far deeper than mine- I admire your abstract but intelligent way of thinking!
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chapter 2 review
Rootkis
said:
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Try- the better path
i really liked it. i liked how it's true.
Such as how people never show you the way.
Many time they just criticize. Then ...more "
i really liked it. i liked how it's true.
Such as how people never show you the way.
Many time they just criticize. Then ...more "
chapter 2 review
Andre
said:
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This is a really deep, personal piece. I'm speechless- i do't know what to say!
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chapter 3 review
Rootkis
said:
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it's true people that are mostly silent seem to have a stronger effect on people, as opposed to the people that are loud and obnoxious. silence is ind...more
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chapter 3 review
Mrs. Kaminsky
said:
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This piece has so many levels. I really need to read it several times to fully comprehend all the meanings within. That is the thing about poetry--goo...more
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chapter 3 review
Andre
said:
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Your poems remind me a lot of my "The Idea" collection I have on my profile. Your poems have a better rhythm though. They flow very well!
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chapter 5 review
Naomi
said:
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Awesome!!!!!! I love it!!!!! It's awesome!!!!!!!!! GO PSYC!!!!!!!!!
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chapter 7 review
Naomi
said:
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Hmmm... I never noticed that......And now I do. I'll have to go back and see that.
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