Spelling words

by Ling-Ling HB
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genre: Drama
description:
In math class my teacher had up some spelling words I got an idea. Starred words mean they were one of the words.


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chapter 1: Screams of pain


Screams of pain
chapter 1   —   updated 10/10/08   —   515 characters   —   5 people liked it   —   5 reviews
I walked through the dark forest, holding onto tree branches as I stumbled. On my way through I saw an old man, he was frail and bald.His dead wife sat beside him "take it" he rasped handing me a peice of bread. I nodded and took it, which was *pathetic* and rude. But since the *famine* had started everyone was starving. I heard a noise come from my older brother's gun. Then I ran back and pressed myself against a tree like a *chameleon*. He screamed in pain and I heard a loud thud.His bullet had *ricocheted*.
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♥ Brigid ♥ said:
" cool! "

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Riley said:
" a little too emo and depressing.
I like it! "

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Meagan said:
" aww thats sad but I like it "

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Char said:
" it sounds like a great beginning for a story! you should continue it... "

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♫☼♥Rachel♥☼♫ said:
" wow. you should write more..... but its a little strange........ "

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