Spelling words
by Ling-Ling HB
genre:
Drama
description:
In math class my teacher had up some spelling words I got an idea. Starred words mean they were one of the words.
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chapter 1:
Screams of pain
Screams of pain
chapter 1
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updated 10/10/08
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I walked through the dark forest, holding onto tree branches as I stumbled. On my way through I saw an old man, he was frail and bald.His dead wife sat beside him "take it" he rasped handing me a peice of bread. I nodded and took it, which was *pathetic* and rude. But since the *famine* had started everyone was starving. I heard a noise come from my older brother's gun. Then I ran back and pressed myself against a tree like a *chameleon*. He screamed in pain and I heard a loud thud.His bullet had *ricocheted*.
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Char
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it sounds like a great beginning for a story! you should continue it...
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♫☼♥Rachel♥☼♫
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wow. you should write more..... but its a little strange........
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