The Idea: Words of Wisdom - The Thought by Thatstranger95

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A collection of poems describing the types of entities we usually don't think about in daily life



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chapter 1: The Thought

chapter 2: The Love

chapter 3: The Imagination

chapter 4: The Serenity

chapter 5: The Other World

chapter 6: The Sound

chapter 7: The Agony

chapter 8: The Time

chapter 9: The Perspective

chapter 10: The End


The Thought
chapter 1   —   updated Dec 02, 2008   —   593 characters   —   15 people liked this writing   —   13 reviews of this writing
A thought never dies, nor does it vanish from our world,
It is an unstoppable energy no one can rid,
That can never be destroyed.

Like a boomerang,
Thoughts strike us again like incoming missiles,
We can't keep them out of our heads for long.

They live on forever,
Like immortal spirits,
Traveling and forever living like a human being among us.

Thoughts whisper in our ears,
Tap us on our shoulders when we don't expect it,
Rush past us before our very eyes.

Then, they are stuck inside us,
Like a prisoner, for eternity,
A secret, a memory, a lie, a deed.
A thought...
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chapter 1 review
Mrs. Kaminsky said:
" Like a boomerang,
Thoughts strike us again like incoming missiles

This is a wonderful visual image. You do so well with imagery and meta…more "
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Forever Dreamer Trey said:
" SIMPLY AMAZING... "
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Psyc94 said:
" It's kind of like...secondary thinking...when it comes back. "
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Sheeky said:
" Better than chocolate. "
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chapter 2 review
Psyc94 said:
" This is AWESOME!!!
My kind of writing wouldn't try to compare to this.
Great work. "
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Manda liked it
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chapter 3 review
Psyc94 said:
" ...this makes me think of electric ice... "
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chapter 4 review
Psyc94 said:
" I see this as a form of meditation... "
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chapter 5 review
Psyc94 said:
" ...This lets me understand three parts that shift in ways that can split bodies apart... "
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chapter 6 review
Psyc94 said:
" ...saddening...effective...and memorable... "
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chapter 7 review
Psyc94 said:
" I have a question...is pain really pain, or is pain something else? Really think about this before you answer... "
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chapter 8 review
Psyc94 said:
" Past be still...present be active...future be dormant... "
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chapter 9 review
Psyc94 said:
" It is, as it was. And always changes... "
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chapter 10 review
Psyc94 said:
" Well...continue writing, at least!! "
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