A Like for Nature - Hovering Clouds (chapter 7) by Thatstranger95
genre
tags
description:
A collection of poems that describe the beauty of the simplest things in nature...
chapters
chapter 1:
A Day in the Wood
chapter 2:
Lounging at the Beach
chapter 3:
Watching the Snowfall
chapter 4:
Changing Colors
chapter 5:
Listening to the Rain
chapter 6:
Warming Up
chapter 7:
Hovering Clouds
Hovering Clouds
chapter 7
—
updated Feb 16, 2009
—
492 characters
—
10 people liked this writing
—
8 reviews of this writing
When sunshine is absent,
From the classroom in the sky,
I know the clouds are here,
To spend those 6 hours,
Though light may not shine,
The pale darkness is wonderful,
Full of boldness and gentleness,
That it brings with it,
Yet the sun still peeks through,
Like a sheepish infant,
Casting a whitish glow from above,
Penetrating past those giant puffs,
All of it is so soothing to take in,
Like meditating,
While gazing at our own surroundings,
So simple, its gorgeous...
back to top
From the classroom in the sky,
I know the clouds are here,
To spend those 6 hours,
Though light may not shine,
The pale darkness is wonderful,
Full of boldness and gentleness,
That it brings with it,
Yet the sun still peeks through,
Like a sheepish infant,
Casting a whitish glow from above,
Penetrating past those giant puffs,
All of it is so soothing to take in,
Like meditating,
While gazing at our own surroundings,
So simple, its gorgeous...
Did you like this?
vote
(10 people liked this writing)
reviews of this writing
chapter 1 review
Mrs. Kaminsky
said:
"
Hampton, I have goosebumps. This is so deep. Your descriptions are unique..."coffee-colored rabbits." Wow. We need to dig into some writing ...more
"
chapter 1 review
Psyc94
said:
"
If only regular days were that peaceful around the world...it would create a huge impact on what we could see...
"
chapter 2 review
Psyc94
said:
"
Wow, you know how to describe settings...really great. I look forward to more of your writing.
"
chapter 3 review
Psyc94
said:
"
Yeah...I don't compare to this at all...and I think it's nice. =] Mine are as brief as yours are vivid...this style (meaning yours) has me to long for...more
"
chapter 5 review
Psyc94
said:
"
As long as we think of a sense of completion, there can be a full voice...
"
chapter 6 review
Psyc94
said:
"
There are many analogies I could summarize this with...
(One being risen from ashes in a number of times.) "
(One being risen from ashes in a number of times.) "
chapter 7 review
Psyc94
said:
"
Towards the end...it may not come...but slowly exstinguishes and ressurects...
"


