A Like for Nature - Warming Up (chapter 6) by Thatstranger95

Nophoto-m-50x66
genre

tags

description:
A collection of poems that describe the beauty of the simplest things in nature...



chapters

chapter 1: A Day in the Wood

chapter 4: Changing Colors

chapter 6: Warming Up

chapter 7: Hovering Clouds


Warming Up
chapter 6   —   updated Jan 25, 2009   —   852 characters   —   10 people liked this writing   —   8 reviews of this writing
One morning, I awake to a sudden chill when I walk outside,
Brrrrr, How cold it is!
My breath visible in the freezing air,
I feel like I'm standing next to a block of ice,

It overwhelms me,
I shudder violently,
Wrapping my bare hands around me,
Legs close together, the cold touching my cheeks,

I have to get warm,
My body heat is dropping by the second,
How did it get so frosty?
I don't understand.

I wait a bit outside,
Frozen to the solid ground below me,
I can't budge,
Like an evergreen, whose stump holds it firmly down,

Then, slowly from the gray, humungous clouds,
Light begins to leak through,
And at last, the sun is out,
To rescue me from my hold,

The heat of the sun greets me,
Like an old friend that has come to visit,
I love its warmth, a great sensation,

I think I can now take off my wool scarf now.
back to top

Did you like this?   vote   (10 people liked this writing)

reviews of this writing

1513121
chapter 1 review
Mrs. Kaminsky said:
" Hampton, I have goosebumps. This is so deep. Your descriptions are unique..."coffee-colored rabbits." Wow. We need to dig into some writing …more "
61179
chapter 1 review
Saved By Grace liked it
1523096
chapter 1 review
Gabby liked it
1522925
chapter 1 review
Psyc94 said:
" If only regular days were that peaceful around the world...it would create a huge impact on what we could see... "
1522925
chapter 2 review
Psyc94 said:
" Wow, you know how to describe settings...really great. I look forward to more of your writing. "
1522925
chapter 3 review
Psyc94 said:
" Yeah...I don't compare to this at all...and I think it's nice. =] Mine are as brief as yours are vivid...this style (meaning yours) has me to long for…more "
1522925
chapter 4 review
Psyc94 said:
" Just as I said before...and I can feel the wind...how majestic. "
1522925
chapter 5 review
Psyc94 said:
" As long as we think of a sense of completion, there can be a full voice... "
1522925
chapter 6 review
Psyc94 said:
" There are many analogies I could summarize this with...
(One being risen from ashes in a number of times.) "
1522925
chapter 7 review
Psyc94 said:
" Towards the end...it may not come...but slowly exstinguishes and ressurects... "
all writing
all of Thatstranger95's writing