A Like for Nature - Listening to the Rain (chapter 5) by Thatstranger95

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A collection of poems that describe the beauty of the simplest things in nature...



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chapter 1: A Day in the Wood

chapter 4: Changing Colors

chapter 5: Listening to the Rain

chapter 6: Warming Up

chapter 7: Hovering Clouds


Listening to the Rain
chapter 5   —   updated Nov 18, 2008   —   559 characters   —   10 people liked this writing   —   8 reviews of this writing
A gentle song is heard outside,
Tapping on the roof above my bedroom,
Like the sound of many little feet,
I lay in bed, hearing the rain,

A sound from nature,
It makes me feel so calm,
Sharp but ginger,
One so soothing, it puts me to sleep,

The constant noise over the ceiling,
The puny sounds of dripping water,
Flowing down the streets at night,
No matter what, the rain could never be more pure,

I know it will stop,
It will eventually end,
But knowing it will come back someday,
I think to myself, I will hear its music once more.....
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Mrs. Kaminsky said:
" Hampton, I have goosebumps. This is so deep. Your descriptions are unique..."coffee-colored rabbits." Wow. We need to dig into some writing …more "
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Psyc94 said:
" If only regular days were that peaceful around the world...it would create a huge impact on what we could see... "
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chapter 2 review
Psyc94 said:
" Wow, you know how to describe settings...really great. I look forward to more of your writing. "
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chapter 3 review
Psyc94 said:
" Yeah...I don't compare to this at all...and I think it's nice. =] Mine are as brief as yours are vivid...this style (meaning yours) has me to long for…more "
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chapter 4 review
Psyc94 said:
" Just as I said before...and I can feel the wind...how majestic. "
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chapter 5 review
Psyc94 said:
" As long as we think of a sense of completion, there can be a full voice... "
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chapter 6 review
Psyc94 said:
" There are many analogies I could summarize this with...
(One being risen from ashes in a number of times.) "
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chapter 7 review
Psyc94 said:
" Towards the end...it may not come...but slowly exstinguishes and ressurects... "
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