A Like for Nature - Listening to the Rain (chapter 5) by Thatstranger95
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A collection of poems that describe the beauty of the simplest things in nature...
chapters
chapter 1:
A Day in the Wood
chapter 2:
Lounging at the Beach
chapter 3:
Watching the Snowfall
chapter 4:
Changing Colors
chapter 5:
Listening to the Rain
chapter 6:
Warming Up
chapter 7:
Hovering Clouds
Listening to the Rain
chapter 5
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updated Nov 18, 2008
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A gentle song is heard outside,
Tapping on the roof above my bedroom,
Like the sound of many little feet,
I lay in bed, hearing the rain,
A sound from nature,
It makes me feel so calm,
Sharp but ginger,
One so soothing, it puts me to sleep,
The constant noise over the ceiling,
The puny sounds of dripping water,
Flowing down the streets at night,
No matter what, the rain could never be more pure,
I know it will stop,
It will eventually end,
But knowing it will come back someday,
I think to myself, I will hear its music once more.....
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Tapping on the roof above my bedroom,
Like the sound of many little feet,
I lay in bed, hearing the rain,
A sound from nature,
It makes me feel so calm,
Sharp but ginger,
One so soothing, it puts me to sleep,
The constant noise over the ceiling,
The puny sounds of dripping water,
Flowing down the streets at night,
No matter what, the rain could never be more pure,
I know it will stop,
It will eventually end,
But knowing it will come back someday,
I think to myself, I will hear its music once more.....
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chapter 1 review
Mrs. Kaminsky
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Hampton, I have goosebumps. This is so deep. Your descriptions are unique..."coffee-colored rabbits." Wow. We need to dig into some writing …more
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chapter 1 review
Psyc94
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If only regular days were that peaceful around the world...it would create a huge impact on what we could see...
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chapter 2 review
Psyc94
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Wow, you know how to describe settings...really great. I look forward to more of your writing.
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chapter 3 review
Psyc94
said:
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Yeah...I don't compare to this at all...and I think it's nice. =] Mine are as brief as yours are vivid...this style (meaning yours) has me to long for…more
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chapter 5 review
Psyc94
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As long as we think of a sense of completion, there can be a full voice...
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chapter 6 review
Psyc94
said:
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There are many analogies I could summarize this with...
(One being risen from ashes in a number of times.) "
(One being risen from ashes in a number of times.) "
chapter 7 review
Psyc94
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Towards the end...it may not come...but slowly exstinguishes and ressurects...
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