A Like for Nature - Changing Colors (chapter 4) by Thatstranger95
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A collection of poems that describe the beauty of the simplest things in nature...
chapters
chapter 1:
A Day in the Wood
chapter 2:
Lounging at the Beach
chapter 3:
Watching the Snowfall
chapter 4:
Changing Colors
chapter 5:
Listening to the Rain
chapter 6:
Warming Up
chapter 7:
Hovering Clouds
Changing Colors
chapter 4
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updated Oct 23, 2008
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Autumn makes its vivid presence,
When the hues of the leaves begin to alter,
Like a fruit ripening,
The bold green color disappears,
And then warm, oranges, yellows, reds, and browns set in,
Taking the previous places of other colors,
And when they do, the trees start to brighten,
Their colors beaming proudly,
The leaves gather on the ground,
A bunch of old friends finally coming together,
The air turns cold and crisp,
Fall has made its mark,
Leaves are swept away,
Thrown carelessly into the trash,
But, among everyone else,
I keep them, and admire them, forever......
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When the hues of the leaves begin to alter,
Like a fruit ripening,
The bold green color disappears,
And then warm, oranges, yellows, reds, and browns set in,
Taking the previous places of other colors,
And when they do, the trees start to brighten,
Their colors beaming proudly,
The leaves gather on the ground,
A bunch of old friends finally coming together,
The air turns cold and crisp,
Fall has made its mark,
Leaves are swept away,
Thrown carelessly into the trash,
But, among everyone else,
I keep them, and admire them, forever......
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chapter 1 review
Mrs. Kaminsky
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Hampton, I have goosebumps. This is so deep. Your descriptions are unique..."coffee-colored rabbits." Wow. We need to dig into some writing ...more
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chapter 1 review
Psyc94
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If only regular days were that peaceful around the world...it would create a huge impact on what we could see...
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chapter 2 review
Psyc94
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Wow, you know how to describe settings...really great. I look forward to more of your writing.
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chapter 3 review
Psyc94
said:
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Yeah...I don't compare to this at all...and I think it's nice. =] Mine are as brief as yours are vivid...this style (meaning yours) has me to long for...more
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chapter 5 review
Psyc94
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As long as we think of a sense of completion, there can be a full voice...
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chapter 6 review
Psyc94
said:
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There are many analogies I could summarize this with...
(One being risen from ashes in a number of times.) "
(One being risen from ashes in a number of times.) "
chapter 7 review
Psyc94
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Towards the end...it may not come...but slowly exstinguishes and ressurects...
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