A Like for Nature - Lounging at the Beach (chapter 2) by Thatstranger95
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A collection of poems that describe the beauty of the simplest things in nature...
chapters
chapter 1:
A Day in the Wood
chapter 2:
Lounging at the Beach
chapter 3:
Watching the Snowfall
chapter 4:
Changing Colors
chapter 5:
Listening to the Rain
chapter 6:
Warming Up
chapter 7:
Hovering Clouds
Lounging at the Beach
chapter 2
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updated Sep 23, 2008
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The soft, vanilla sand is warm from the rays of the sun,
I lay my feet on the sand, so smooth and cozy, like a silk blanket,
The foamy, turquiose waters of the sea crash against the shore,
Spraying a delicate ocean mist,
Seaqulls cry such sad ballads,
Dedicated to the souls of legendary sailors and captains,
who lost their lives in such a watery grave,
As the buoyies roll on a mass of never-ending blue,
So lonely a beach could be, after everyone has left,
Yet so peaceful, and soothing, like a living lullaby,
The waves, the gulls, and the salty breeze,
Might, just might, put you to sleep,
How lovely, and gorgeous, a beach could be as well,
The hues and shapes of exotic flowers, and gigantic, fruit bearing trees,
The sunset is so magical, a vivid, mixing blur of color
Giving the beach its prominent touch,
A beach, with its simplicity, but also its great beauty...
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I lay my feet on the sand, so smooth and cozy, like a silk blanket,
The foamy, turquiose waters of the sea crash against the shore,
Spraying a delicate ocean mist,
Seaqulls cry such sad ballads,
Dedicated to the souls of legendary sailors and captains,
who lost their lives in such a watery grave,
As the buoyies roll on a mass of never-ending blue,
So lonely a beach could be, after everyone has left,
Yet so peaceful, and soothing, like a living lullaby,
The waves, the gulls, and the salty breeze,
Might, just might, put you to sleep,
How lovely, and gorgeous, a beach could be as well,
The hues and shapes of exotic flowers, and gigantic, fruit bearing trees,
The sunset is so magical, a vivid, mixing blur of color
Giving the beach its prominent touch,
A beach, with its simplicity, but also its great beauty...
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chapter 1 review
Mrs. Kaminsky
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Hampton, I have goosebumps. This is so deep. Your descriptions are unique..."coffee-colored rabbits." Wow. We need to dig into some writing …more
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chapter 1 review
Psyc94
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If only regular days were that peaceful around the world...it would create a huge impact on what we could see...
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chapter 2 review
Psyc94
said:
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Wow, you know how to describe settings...really great. I look forward to more of your writing.
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chapter 3 review
Psyc94
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Yeah...I don't compare to this at all...and I think it's nice. =] Mine are as brief as yours are vivid...this style (meaning yours) has me to long for…more
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chapter 5 review
Psyc94
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As long as we think of a sense of completion, there can be a full voice...
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chapter 6 review
Psyc94
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There are many analogies I could summarize this with...
(One being risen from ashes in a number of times.) "
(One being risen from ashes in a number of times.) "
chapter 7 review
Psyc94
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Towards the end...it may not come...but slowly exstinguishes and ressurects...
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