A Like for Nature - Lounging at the Beach (chapter 2) by Thatstranger95

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A collection of poems that describe the beauty of the simplest things in nature...



chapters

chapter 1: A Day in the Wood

chapter 2: Lounging at the Beach

chapter 4: Changing Colors

chapter 6: Warming Up

chapter 7: Hovering Clouds


Lounging at the Beach
chapter 2   —   updated Sep 23, 2008   —   912 characters   —   10 people liked this writing   —   8 reviews of this writing
The soft, vanilla sand is warm from the rays of the sun,
I lay my feet on the sand, so smooth and cozy, like a silk blanket,
The foamy, turquiose waters of the sea crash against the shore,
Spraying a delicate ocean mist,

Seaqulls cry such sad ballads,
Dedicated to the souls of legendary sailors and captains,
who lost their lives in such a watery grave,
As the buoyies roll on a mass of never-ending blue,

So lonely a beach could be, after everyone has left,
Yet so peaceful, and soothing, like a living lullaby,
The waves, the gulls, and the salty breeze,
Might, just might, put you to sleep,

How lovely, and gorgeous, a beach could be as well,
The hues and shapes of exotic flowers, and gigantic, fruit bearing trees,
The sunset is so magical, a vivid, mixing blur of color
Giving the beach its prominent touch,
A beach, with its simplicity, but also its great beauty...







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Mrs. Kaminsky said:
" Hampton, I have goosebumps. This is so deep. Your descriptions are unique..."coffee-colored rabbits." Wow. We need to dig into some writing …more "
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Psyc94 said:
" If only regular days were that peaceful around the world...it would create a huge impact on what we could see... "
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chapter 2 review
Psyc94 said:
" Wow, you know how to describe settings...really great. I look forward to more of your writing. "
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chapter 3 review
Psyc94 said:
" Yeah...I don't compare to this at all...and I think it's nice. =] Mine are as brief as yours are vivid...this style (meaning yours) has me to long for…more "
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chapter 4 review
Psyc94 said:
" Just as I said before...and I can feel the wind...how majestic. "
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chapter 5 review
Psyc94 said:
" As long as we think of a sense of completion, there can be a full voice... "
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chapter 6 review
Psyc94 said:
" There are many analogies I could summarize this with...
(One being risen from ashes in a number of times.) "
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chapter 7 review
Psyc94 said:
" Towards the end...it may not come...but slowly exstinguishes and ressurects... "
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