An immortal pain
by Josh Finicum
genre:
Poetry
description:
it is what it is
chapters
chapter 1:
An immortal pain
An immortal pain
chapter 1
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updated 10/09/08
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7 people liked it
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The world at my finger tips
But i dont know what i want
I see all, but nothing apeals
I desire, but i cant find.
The sound of thunder in my ears
The sound of drums
The sound of the melodious voice
The sound of the harsh voice
I've heard it all, hear all,
But there is no song i can dance to.
A hundred thousand faces I've seen
The pretty ones, the plain ones
All the ones in between.
But ive never seen a face
That i could truly love.
I have felt the spirits around me
I have known them all
Understood the drive and passion behind them
But never has there been a single one
That could stand behind me
Never one I could call my own.
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But i dont know what i want
I see all, but nothing apeals
I desire, but i cant find.
The sound of thunder in my ears
The sound of drums
The sound of the melodious voice
The sound of the harsh voice
I've heard it all, hear all,
But there is no song i can dance to.
A hundred thousand faces I've seen
The pretty ones, the plain ones
All the ones in between.
But ive never seen a face
That i could truly love.
I have felt the spirits around me
I have known them all
Understood the drive and passion behind them
But never has there been a single one
That could stand behind me
Never one I could call my own.
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chapter 1 review
i ♥ E.C.
said:
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cool...as to how it makes me feel, that's kinda hard...I suppose I feel hopeless.
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chapter 1 review
Michael
said:
"
I took this a little different. Its as if your at a crossroads of choice and cannot decide what direction to take. A person on the verge of apathy a...more
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