Mid-August

by Randomanthony
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genre: Poetry
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Mid-August


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Mid-August
chapter 1   —   updated 11/01/08   —   458 characters   —   21 people liked it   —   11 reviews
The fireflies gone
To where fireflies go
Post midsummer

Amethystine shadows
Flutter near the garage
And the cloven, moon-edged air
Is no longer a barrier
Between here and
Backfield trees.

You are out east.
Our sons on their bicycles
Sluice across the cobblestones
In front of your mother’s house.

You will reach home in two days.
You are like the sleeping birds

Tangible across the separated atmosphere
Of our backyard’s ether.
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Mindy said:
" That is lovely, RA! And so sweet! I've never read a poem by someone whose background story I kinda "know." It made it a lot more poignant. V "

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Donald said:
" Ya big softie, you. "

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Hayley said:
" wow RA that is so lovely, I loved it. "

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" Very nice work, RA! "

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Sandi said:
" I liked the "Amethystine shadows". Cool image.

I wish we had fireflies. I feel like I miss an important part of summer by having never se...more "

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" Tastes like Dandelion Wine :) "

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Michelle said:
" Very sweet, RA. "

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" yes lovely "

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" Nice. "

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" Lovely piece of writing! "

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" Beautiful. "

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