Song of the Sparrow

by Lisa Ann
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genre: Literature & Fiction
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The year is 490 AD. Fiery 16-year-old Elaine of Ascolat, the daughter of one of King Arthur's supporters, lives with her father on Arthur's base camp, the sole girl in a militaristic world of men. Elaine's only girl companion is the mysterious Morgan, Arthur's older sister, but Elaine cannot tell Morgan her deepest secret: She is in love with Lancelot, Arthur's second-in-command. However, when yet another girl -- the lovely Gwynivere -- joins their world, Elaine is confronted with startling emotions of jealousy and rivalry. But can her passion survive the birth of an empire?


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chapter 1: Prologue and Chapter 1


Prologue and Chapter 1
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I am Elaine

daughter of Barnard of Ascolat.

Motherless.

Sisterless.

I sing these words to you now,

because the point of light grows smaller,

ever smaller now,

ever more distant now.

And with this song, I pray I may

push back the tides of war and death.

So, I sing these words

that this light, this tiny

ray of light and hope may live on.

I dare not hope that I

may live on too.


I

Motherless.

Sisterless.

I am both.

But I have brothers,

dozens

nay, hundreds

of brothers.

Only two real ones:

brash Lavain

and my biggest brother, thoughtful Tirry.

The others are not brothers by blood.

There are so many of them;

I call a few my friends:

Lancelot, Arthur's second,

but handsomer, still.

Arthur himself, who is a captain in

his uncle Ambrosius Aurelius's army.

The men here follow Arthur, but ultimate

fealty is to Aurelius, dux bellorum.

There is Gawain, a sweet bear of a man,

and Tristan, who is all mystery

and mischief and glee.

We live here, in this army encampment,

where drums beat and beat

in my dreams and over breakfast,

at sunrise and sundown.

The here and home I speak of

is no more than the collection of dirty,

foul-smelling tents.

I live here, in this army encampment,

among men,

because my mother is dead,

delivered into the earth

nine years ago now,

and there is no one else.

My father brought me here

when I was eight years old.

Once I heard Lavain whisper

to Tirry that it was a good

thing our mother lived to

see me through eight years

of life.

Till I was old enough to learn

to use a thread and needle

and old enough to grow

good at mending clothes.

At least there is

someone

left to mend their clothes,

Lavain said.

But I am just one girl,

without nearly enough hands

to sew the tears

in every man's clothing.

There are too many of them.

For, in these days,

dark battles rage on.

From all sides Britain's enemies

press in on us,

the painted Picts from the north,

maurading Scots from the west,

and the barbarian Saxons from the south

and east.

Britain bleeds

and bleeds

as men like my father and

brothers

even Lavain

bleed and bleed.

We move as the fighting moves,

as the wind moves.

So there might be peace.

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