hunter - chapter 7 (chapter 7) by dancing dimond --alicia

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chapter 1: chapter 1

chapter 2: chapter 2

chapter 3: chapter 3

chapter 4: chapter 4

chapter 5: chapter 5

chapter 6: chapter 6

chapter 7: chapter 7


chapter 7
chapter 7   —   updated Nov 25, 2009   —   1294 characters   —   27 people liked this writing   —   17 reviews of this writing
She looked at him dumbfounded, what did she have to give him, she didn't even know the brute.
She noticed then that he was coming ever closer and that her heart was beating faster than a thouroughbred could run.

"please."he said softly."Don't be afraid of me. I am alone on this god for saken hunk of rock and have been here for centuries."
"alow me to see into your mind, to see emotions, and the beauty of the life you live."

"Why, why are you here and why do you insist on,well...watever your doing, i don't know you, you scare me to death, and all I know is that you are a vampire or something who killed a man to save my life. thank you, THAT is all I have to give you." she blurted out.
she turned her bike around preparing to leave but he was there, stoping her, a strong hand on on her handle bars.
she stood there petrified, stunned into silence.

"alow me" he said, he lifted her bike, gave it to her and extended a hand for her to proceed.

"Is that it? You're just going to let me go like that?
I mean, y-you scared the living hell out of me then you show up here now, and, am I supposed to act like nothing ever happened?"

She got on her bike and sped off, she knew he could catch her if he really wanted to,bend her to his every wish if he wanted to.

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♔ Estefani ♔ said:
" This is very good.

Keep writing!

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goingEMO!! said:
" AWSOMLICIOUS!! you r da next Susan Sizemore!!

WRITE ON DIAMOND WRITE ON!!! "
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call me crazy and be done with it. said:
" whoa! definatly cool! there are alot of vampire books going around!
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That Girl said:
" I really like this. It sucked me in. "
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Kimberly said:
" An interesting beginning! "
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♠Miriam♠ I (nuff said) said:
" this was very good. i could almost imagine it like a horror movie. "
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Kristin A.K.A The Ninja Pirate:) said:
" awwwwwww he's sweet. like i said its sweet torment
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goingEMO!! said:
" OOOOOHHHH!! you've got me in suspense!!! PLZ writ MORE!! (or i might DIE) !!!
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call me crazy and be done with it. said:
" WRITE MORE!!!!! really good! you are a natural! "
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Sara said:
" its really good plz write more
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~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~ said:
" Hey!
This is an awesome beginning to a wonderful story. I noticed only a few words were spelled wrong. I would suggest editing. But other than th…more "
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ChElSeA cLaRiSsE said:
" please write more. =) "
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call me crazy and be done with it. said:
" oh please, please PLEASE keep writeing!!!!!!!! "
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Kristin A.K.A The Ninja Pirate:) said:
" yay. you finally wrote more!!!! "
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Kristin A.K.A The Ninja Pirate:) said:
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