hunter - chapter 6 (chapter 6) by dancing dimond --alicia
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chapter 3:
chapter 3
chapter 4:
chapter 4
chapter 5:
chapter 5
chapter 6:
chapter 6
chapter 7:
chapter 7
chapter 6
chapter 6
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She stood there, staring at him a million questions stampeding through her head.
Who was he, were did he come from, why was he here?
"W-Who are you?" she stammered.
"I am somebody who can be whatever you want me to be." he said.
His voice was mesmerizing, compelling even.
she stared at him a moment longer before grabbing her bike and trying to run away from him.
she didn't believe in this super natural crap, it was insane, although she saw him rip into that man's throat with his teeth.
She had seen his eyes, completely black, no white was showing.
His nails had been long and sharp like those of an animal.
She had been afraid after reading the paper the next day and reading that a man had been found decapitated and his body torn in shreds, no doubt the local animals had chewed on him for a while before the police had found him.
"what do you want from me?"
"I don't know.i guess to say that what you saw me do was a terrible display of ferocity.
"A display of the animal inside me,...and what it can make me do."
"If this seems rude im sorry,but may i ask, do you not understand a threat when you see one?"
He smirked and took a step closer to me.
"You still haven't answered my question, what is that you want from me?"
"What i want, is to be free." he sighed
"I want more han anything to have someone to love me, dispite my flaws and the caged beast inside of me always clawing to get out, i want, i want.....something you can possibly give me."
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Who was he, were did he come from, why was he here?
"W-Who are you?" she stammered.
"I am somebody who can be whatever you want me to be." he said.
His voice was mesmerizing, compelling even.
she stared at him a moment longer before grabbing her bike and trying to run away from him.
she didn't believe in this super natural crap, it was insane, although she saw him rip into that man's throat with his teeth.
She had seen his eyes, completely black, no white was showing.
His nails had been long and sharp like those of an animal.
She had been afraid after reading the paper the next day and reading that a man had been found decapitated and his body torn in shreds, no doubt the local animals had chewed on him for a while before the police had found him.
"what do you want from me?"
"I don't know.i guess to say that what you saw me do was a terrible display of ferocity.
"A display of the animal inside me,...and what it can make me do."
"If this seems rude im sorry,but may i ask, do you not understand a threat when you see one?"
He smirked and took a step closer to me.
"You still haven't answered my question, what is that you want from me?"
"What i want, is to be free." he sighed
"I want more han anything to have someone to love me, dispite my flaws and the caged beast inside of me always clawing to get out, i want, i want.....something you can possibly give me."
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chapter 1 review
goingEMO!!
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AWSOMLICIOUS!! you r da next Susan Sizemore!!
WRITE ON DIAMOND WRITE ON!!! "
WRITE ON DIAMOND WRITE ON!!! "
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call me crazy and be done with it.
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whoa! definatly cool! there are alot of vampire books going around!
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♠Miriam♠ I (nuff said)
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this was very good. i could almost imagine it like a horror movie.
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chapter 2 review
Kristin A.K.A The Ninja Pirate:)
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awwwwwww he's sweet. like i said its sweet torment
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chapter 3 review
goingEMO!!
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OOOOOHHHH!! you've got me in suspense!!! PLZ writ MORE!! (or i might DIE) !!!
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chapter 3 review
call me crazy and be done with it.
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WRITE MORE!!!!! really good! you are a natural!
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chapter 4 review
~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~
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Hey!
This is an awesome beginning to a wonderful story. I noticed only a few words were spelled wrong. I would suggest editing. But other than th…more "
This is an awesome beginning to a wonderful story. I noticed only a few words were spelled wrong. I would suggest editing. But other than th…more "
chapter 4 review
call me crazy and be done with it.
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oh please, please PLEASE keep writeing!!!!!!!!
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