hunter - chapter 1 by dancing dimond --alicia
chapters
chapter 1:
chapter 1
chapter 2:
chapter 2
chapter 3:
chapter 3
chapter 4:
chapter 4
chapter 5:
chapter 5
chapter 6:
chapter 6
chapter 7:
chapter 7
chapter 1
chapter 1
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updated Apr 09, 2009
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In the dark alleys of Listosha, Adrian was hunting an older man following a young girl.
The man quickened his pace and the girl ran she dropped her purse hoping that's all he wanted, but he paid no mind to it and continued to chase her.
Adrian grabbed the girl’s purse, as he pursued the man.
The girl let out a light scream as she saw the man charging toward her. The man did not know that Adrian was after him, gliding among the shadows, eyes blazing with thirst, for he could not control his need, any longer.
The man lunged at the girl as she screamed, Adrian, snatched the man, sinking his teeth into him, the man yelled and writhed beneath him then slowly stilled, as Adrian drained him of his blood. He hadn't fed in a long time for he tried to repress the monster inside him, the beast who breaks him down and terrorizes his mind, the man dropped to the ground as Adrian had finished him, he thought that one slaying would tame his need, but he was wrong, his stomach tightened, taking an innocent life such as this girls, would destroy his soul, and he would be named savage amongst his coven.
He tossed her, her purse, and In a deep warning voice, he called to the girl, his head still hanging so she couldn't see his face,
"leave now, or your life shall not go on!"
the girl stood there staring at him with a vacant expression, as his claws extended, and his teeth shown from under his top lip.
"Now!” he shouted, she snapped out of her trance, picked up her purse and ran for dear life accidentally dropping the I.D.
He fell to his knees and let out a scream of rage, how weak he was, threatening a young girl, Adrian thought.
he got to his feet, and picked up the small card, her sent was all over it, it made his mouth water, his teeth show and his claws extended. NO, he wouldn't track her down and drain her, he couldn't, and he wouldn't.
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The man quickened his pace and the girl ran she dropped her purse hoping that's all he wanted, but he paid no mind to it and continued to chase her.
Adrian grabbed the girl’s purse, as he pursued the man.
The girl let out a light scream as she saw the man charging toward her. The man did not know that Adrian was after him, gliding among the shadows, eyes blazing with thirst, for he could not control his need, any longer.
The man lunged at the girl as she screamed, Adrian, snatched the man, sinking his teeth into him, the man yelled and writhed beneath him then slowly stilled, as Adrian drained him of his blood. He hadn't fed in a long time for he tried to repress the monster inside him, the beast who breaks him down and terrorizes his mind, the man dropped to the ground as Adrian had finished him, he thought that one slaying would tame his need, but he was wrong, his stomach tightened, taking an innocent life such as this girls, would destroy his soul, and he would be named savage amongst his coven.
He tossed her, her purse, and In a deep warning voice, he called to the girl, his head still hanging so she couldn't see his face,
"leave now, or your life shall not go on!"
the girl stood there staring at him with a vacant expression, as his claws extended, and his teeth shown from under his top lip.
"Now!” he shouted, she snapped out of her trance, picked up her purse and ran for dear life accidentally dropping the I.D.
He fell to his knees and let out a scream of rage, how weak he was, threatening a young girl, Adrian thought.
he got to his feet, and picked up the small card, her sent was all over it, it made his mouth water, his teeth show and his claws extended. NO, he wouldn't track her down and drain her, he couldn't, and he wouldn't.
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chapter 1 review
goingEMO!!
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AWSOMLICIOUS!! you r da next Susan Sizemore!!
WRITE ON DIAMOND WRITE ON!!! "
WRITE ON DIAMOND WRITE ON!!! "
chapter 1 review
call me crazy and be done with it.
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whoa! definatly cool! there are alot of vampire books going around!
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chapter 1 review
♠Miriam♠ I (nuff said)
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this was very good. i could almost imagine it like a horror movie.
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chapter 2 review
Kristin A.K.A The Ninja Pirate:)
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awwwwwww he's sweet. like i said its sweet torment
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chapter 3 review
goingEMO!!
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OOOOOHHHH!! you've got me in suspense!!! PLZ writ MORE!! (or i might DIE) !!!
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chapter 3 review
call me crazy and be done with it.
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WRITE MORE!!!!! really good! you are a natural!
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chapter 4 review
~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~
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Hey!
This is an awesome beginning to a wonderful story. I noticed only a few words were spelled wrong. I would suggest editing. But other than th…more "
This is an awesome beginning to a wonderful story. I noticed only a few words were spelled wrong. I would suggest editing. But other than th…more "
chapter 4 review
call me crazy and be done with it.
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oh please, please PLEASE keep writeing!!!!!!!!
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