"Wild Plums"

by Jessica Treat
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genre: Poetry
description:
recent prose poem, written at Civitella Ranieri, Umbertide, Italia.


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chapter 1: "Wild Plums"


"Wild Plums"
chapter 1   —   updated 08/01/08   —   637 characters   —   7 people liked it   —   5 reviews
Sometimes a great sadness settled in. There seemed little hope of ever actually meeting him. Perhaps, some years down the road, they'd share a meal somewhere: in a crowded pub or an outdoor restaurant.
She reminded herself not to want more than that. Desire would only drown her.
On a walk some distance from the castle she'd discovered wild plums. A single tree offered up its branches, its fruit no larger than grapes or green olives, not much plumper than the pit they carried. She bit into one and the sweet tang of its flesh spread through her, wakening her very being.








20 July 2008
Civitella Ranieri
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Noran said:
" You made think of....... for a moment. No desire left anymore, but just wonder what it would be like to see him once more--how he would react? I am ...more "

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Pesh said:
" wow. nicely crafted. sounds so real too. "

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Jasmine said:
" Loved this piece, as fresh and pretty as the wild plum the speaker finds! "

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Maisy said:
" makes me want a plum "

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Bells said:
" Interesting, you are completely a great writer. Your peices come to life. "

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