Ready. Set. Go...

by ♪♫ Emmaleigh ♫♪♥♥♥♥♥
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genre: Science Fiction & Fantasy
description:
In the future, love is all but forgotten. The kids and teens know practically nothing about love, since the adults try so hard not to talk about it. The American Empire is at war with other parts of the world, and teens and children are trained to become warriors. Depending on what color of hair you have, you are assigned to one of the four positions: Attacker, Defender, Stealth Squadder, or Tormentor.

Jonas, a Stealth Squadder, is in love with one of his roommates, Lila, a Defender. He feels that the only way to show his love for Lila is to save her from having to go and fight, where she could get killed. Too bad that's the dream she's been working towards her whole life.

When things don't go according to plan and Jonas gets sent off to fight, Lila realizes that he is something different, special. Along with the help of their other roommate Maddi, a clumsy, overly cheerful, ditsy Tormentor, Lila escapes from the training camp in search of Jonas and the meaning of life and love.



chapters

chapter 1: Prologue

chapter 2: Chapter 1-Lila

chapter 3: Chapter 2-Jonas

chapter 4: Chapter 3-Lila

chapter 5: Chapter 4-Jonas

chapter 6: Chapter 5-Lila

chapter 7: Chapter 6-Lila


Prologue
chapter 1   —   updated 10/22/08   —   1342 characters   —   32 people liked it   —   26 reviews
“Hey Jonas. You still awake?”

Jonas sighed. “Yes Lila, I’m still up.”

“Think we’ll do good tomorrow?” Lila asked hopefully. Again.

“Yes Lila,” Jonas repeated for the 16th time, “Everything’s gonna be fine.”

He could see Lila frown from the opposite bunk. “How can you be so sure? Anything could happen with the Director around! Jonas,” she paused, “I have to get recruited.”

Lila’s deep blue eyes, usually sparkling with pride and determination, were clouded over with anxiousness.

Wincing, Jonas thought of what he would have to do tomorrow. If my plan succeeds, he thought, Lila’s dreams will shatter, and she will be safe.

“Oh, I just ... I just know that things will be fine.”

“Hmm...”

He had never seen Lila so worried before. She was usually so confident and cocky about the Practices. But tomorrow was no ordinary Practice. The Director would be there, watching us and evaluating everyone’s battling potential. Those who were good enough to fight for the American Empire would be Recruited and sent off to war.

Everyone knew that Lila was the best Defender in this camp. She was a rubber band that bounced back and forth, dodging an Attacker one second, taking out a Stealth Squadder the next. No one could take her out.

No one but Jonas.
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Katie said:
" AAAAWEEEEEESOOOOOMEEEEEEEEEEEEE "

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Nikalina said:
" omgsh
GET WRITING!!! I WANT MORE!!!!
aaaahhh this is so good
very hooking
=D
GREAT JOB!!!! "

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Sarah said:
" this is amazing, and can tell a lot in such short time. wow. . . .
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Kella said:
" man, you could totaly publish this!! "

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♥ Brigid ♥ said:
" awesome! i am intrigued... :D "

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KrIsTi Is AwEsOme ♫ ♪ said:
" Keep writing Emma! Loving it!!! "

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Rosie said:
" Intense! I want more!! "

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Chloe said:
" OMG U BETTER WRITE MORE!!!!!! it was sooooooo good... WAY better than my stories! "

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kate said:
" this is fantabulas in every way possible "

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♥ Brigid ♥ said:
" cool! "

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Alhana said:
" That was amazing! I sure hope you keep writing!!!! "

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Rosie said:
" Oh, that's so sad. I hope he does betray her. Well, I know he betrays her from the description, but I hope it goes okay. I love it...so much... "

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Nightshade said:
" OOOH!! I have no idea what's going on, but it's exciting!! What are color transmittors?? "

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chapter 4 review
Chloe said:
" dude write FASTER!! "

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Rosie said:
" OH MY GOSH!! I love it!!! I love it!!!! "

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Chloe said:
" You could call it "forbidden love "

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Katie said:
" OK HURRY UP AND WRITE OR I'LL....I'LL....UM....UH.....DO SOMETHING BAD!!!! "

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Sella said:
" This is amazing!! I need to know more!! "

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Alhana said:
" Your writing is absolutely amazing!!! I would like to see more of it!!!! "

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♥ Brigid ♥ said:
" this is really amazing!! it's such an interesting and original story; the plot is fantastic, and the characters are really strong. you have serious ta...more "

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Katie said:
" HUUUURRRYYYY UUUUUP "

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Danielle said:
" Hey Emma! Wow, i didn't know you were SO good at writing. I loved your story I was totally hooked. You should finish it... soon! :)
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Whitney said:
" Wow this is amazing!! you totally have to keep writing it!! "

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Aime said:
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Write more!
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Rosie said:
" Oh, please, please, please, please write more! It's so amazing! "

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Brian said:
" Fantastic writing Emma!! you have got a gift!! I want more!! "

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