Ruler of the night

by Danielle
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genre: Poetry
description:
Yeah, it's a poem. Please read it and tell me what you think! It's my first one so I hope I did okay...


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chapter 1: Prince


Prince
chapter 1   —   updated 07/05/08   —   724 characters   —   2 people liked it   —   1 review
My gothic prince

Ruler of the night

Controller of the shadows

To whom all dark creatures bow

Blackest eyes full of love

Teeth gleaming and pointed

His skin of finest porcelain

And raw strength of many men

Tongue ready to taste the sweetness of forbidden drink

Offered so willingly as I bare my neck for him

But now pain mars his perfect features

He dare not drink from my veins

For he fears seizing what I would so freely give

This hindering mortality of mine that keeps us apart

He refuses to take me as his gothic mate

Fearing that to do so would damn my soul

But how can my prince not see that a life without him

Would be eternally worse then living in Hell by his side?
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" Dani u write sad stuff...but it's still good!!!

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