Poetry
by Dave Russell
genre:
Poetry
description:
For now I'm just going to post this one poem. It's the only I've written that doesn't make me wince when I reread it.
chapters
chapter 1:
Rain
Rain
chapter 1
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updated 08/18/08
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11 people liked it
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At night the rain falls:
Now the streets will reflect the
Lights from the shops.
Waiting hotel room:
Wine carpet, egg-shell blinds and
A newly-made bed.
She lets her hair down:
The moon from behind the clouds
Shows its face again.
Smoke from cigarettes
Drifting, drifting through the room—
“Does it bother you?”
Out on the sidewalk:
Stillness, quiet, nobody
Around. It is night.
The sound of a sax
Wraps itself around the pole
Of a lone street-lamp.
Sounds of slowing down:
Black auto, even blacker
The shadows it casts.
A gun—wine carpet—
The rain beats on the window
As the sax winds down.
The stars shine above:
He sits on the window-ledge—
How the rain does fall.
A flood is let loose:
The roads offer no passage—
The smoke still floats there.
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Now the streets will reflect the
Lights from the shops.
Waiting hotel room:
Wine carpet, egg-shell blinds and
A newly-made bed.
She lets her hair down:
The moon from behind the clouds
Shows its face again.
Smoke from cigarettes
Drifting, drifting through the room—
“Does it bother you?”
Out on the sidewalk:
Stillness, quiet, nobody
Around. It is night.
The sound of a sax
Wraps itself around the pole
Of a lone street-lamp.
Sounds of slowing down:
Black auto, even blacker
The shadows it casts.
A gun—wine carpet—
The rain beats on the window
As the sax winds down.
The stars shine above:
He sits on the window-ledge—
How the rain does fall.
A flood is let loose:
The roads offer no passage—
The smoke still floats there.
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chapter 1 review
Amanda
said:
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Oh my. I'm scared!
Is this the breakup story we've been waiting for? :) "
Is this the breakup story we've been waiting for? :) "
chapter 1 review
Rosni
said:
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Great poem, the sense and mystery was very well portrayed!I liked it!
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