Explaining My Religion

by Jenni Pahl
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genre: Poetry
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Explaining My Religion


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Explaining My Religion
chapter 1   —   updated 08/13/08   —   490 characters   —   15 people liked it   —   8 reviews
I walk backwards. If I follow
the darkening path and take enough
steps, I might forget this life and burst
into another where moths sing,

where ants decline to sleep because
of love, where my shadow is stuck
inside the trunk of a dying elm.

Lamps flicker in time with the trapped
mouse's heart. Somewhere overhead,
a plane slices the clouds. They fall

apart like childhood puzzles.
The engine sputters a wave.
I will not mention silos
flaming in sunlight.
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" i feel this way sometimes in the dark of nite alone, while others get to slumber and sleep cheats me another night. "

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" Wow, you're really good. I can close my eyes and sort of just FEEL it. This is great. Check out mine! "

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Joseph said:
" visually fantastical! i especially liked "...I might forget this life and burst into another where moths sing..." it's like a metaphysical s...more "

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" Excellent! "

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