Running From Me, Running From High School

by Cristal B
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genre: Poetry
description:
I wrote it in Creative Writing, like most of these. My teacher didn't get it, so maybe there's somewhere i can fix it. If anyone has any ideas, I'm open to criticism.


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chapter 1   —   updated 09/07/08   —   594 characters   —   0 people liked it
The words on my tongue
fester behind a closed portal.
I swallow them, afraid
what they will reveal
to the gazes that burn
into my back.

As I walk,
smoking glares measure
and weigh every move.
They wait, like lions
stalking behind
Savannah grass.

When I feel their judgments’
weight on my shoulders,
I know
that a wrong move means death.
Shame.
One more moment
that scorches my mind's eye
when I look back.

One more for my collection.

When I swallow my words,
I trap myself in my own throat.
With lowered eyes, I continue
down the school hall

in silence.
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