Chance - Poem by Nadia Brown

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chapter 1   —   updated Feb 01, 2009   —   241 characters   —   8 people liked this writing   —   3 reviews of this writing

His smile erases
what was once
an imperfect day.

As he appears
time misplaces memory
and moments end.

Relevant thoughts
slip like fog
from consequence.

Even wind ceases
to dance
in his midst.

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" This is a great poem. It is short and gets its point across. "
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" I like the action contained in the spare words; there is quite a bit going on here. "
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" "Even the wind and the waves obey him"? "
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