Forget-Me-Not
by Eva-chan
genre:
Romance
description:
This is the tentitive begining of a short story I'm writing. I like it, but whenever I work on it, it makes me feel sad...
chapters
chapter 1:
A Room of White
chapter 2:
The Story
A Room of White
chapter 1
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updated 06/10/08
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871 characters
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7 people liked it
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6 reviews
Pale slats of light shone through the half-closed blinds. It fell across the face of a girl staring at the ceiling. Flowers in a vase slowly swayed as a nurse bustled around the white, sterile room. She checked a clipboard, and then clicked out of the door, heels smacking the hard floor as she went.
A minute later, she walked back in, leading a boy who thanked her and then walked over to the girl’s bed. The girl stared at him vacantly. “Who are you?” she asked, turning her head weakly.
The boy smiled. He spoke gently to the girl as he arranged the pale blue flowers in the vase, adding a new one as he did. “I wanted to keep you some company. It’s good that you finally woke up.” He pulled a chair over and sat down by her. “If you want, I’ll tell you a story.”
She was silent a moment and then said softly, “Yeah. I’d like that.”
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A minute later, she walked back in, leading a boy who thanked her and then walked over to the girl’s bed. The girl stared at him vacantly. “Who are you?” she asked, turning her head weakly.
The boy smiled. He spoke gently to the girl as he arranged the pale blue flowers in the vase, adding a new one as he did. “I wanted to keep you some company. It’s good that you finally woke up.” He pulled a chair over and sat down by her. “If you want, I’ll tell you a story.”
She was silent a moment and then said softly, “Yeah. I’d like that.”
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chapter 1 review
KiwiBug
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Your descriptions are great, I can see the room she's in already! I can hear the nurse's high heals clicking out of it, I can see the forget-me-not fl...more
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chapter 2 review
KiwiBug
said:
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I love the second chapter too! I can't wait to see what you write next!! It really is wonderful so far!
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