Letter To You

by Jenni Pahl
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genre: Poetry
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Letter To You


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chapter 1: Letter To You


Letter To You
chapter 1   —   updated 11/17/08   —   430 characters   —   25 people liked it   —   10 reviews


You know who
you are I hope.
Light washes dirty windows.

I’ve had enough
of love, my fill. Finished,
I’ll walk out onto the still green

grass and keep on walking.
There are many ways to leave,
the gravel road pocked with ruts.

This is my last love letter.
Better poets have said it better.
What letter might end love?

At first I thought X,
the in and out of declarations.
Now I know it ends in why.
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