The Dream

by Nii
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genre: Poetry
description:
I write my poetry to postpone reality


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chapter 1: The Dream


The Dream
chapter 1   —   updated 10/20/08   —   349 characters   —   3 people liked it   —   2 reviews
The hat goes scuttling by 
At the height of your hip
a gray cloud over the child’s head
drowning him in the desert 
wings so wet he cannot takeoff
reaching for your delicate ghost
breathing disappointment 
a fragile hope tearing beneath your feet
the silent cry of a dead oak in your ear
as your head strikes the wooden floor

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Erin said:
" It makes my heart stop... I'm sure I've said this before, but this applies: The Dream has a Davey-esque aspect to it, for lack of a better way to expr...more "

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Harmony said:
" WOAH!!! I LOVE this!! holy cow! wow. Nicely done Nicole! Your writing really takes me to the scene and gives me a part to play. This poem is so ...more "

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