Marriage Verse

by Nii

genre: Poetry
description:
speculation on arranged relationships

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chapter 1: Marriage Verse

Marriage Verse

chapter 1 — updated 10/20/08 — 214 characters — 2 people liked it — 2 reviews

Goodbye hearth light, frayed rug, rusty pan 
Goodbye sister’s laugh and dancing tambourine
Goodbye soft caresses, tear-full shoulder, protecting arms
Hello, new place, of which nothing can be seen

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Erin said:

" I enjoyed this and the insight into the mind of someone entering into an arranged relationship. You tell it so well, as if you yourself lived an expe...more "

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Harmony said:

" I really like this Nicole! The first three lines make me sad, but then the last line brings up mixed feelings: sadness, fear, anxiety, curiosity...at...more "

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