Trail

by Bebe M. A.
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genre: Literature & Fiction
description:
Short Story


chapters

chapter 1: One

chapter 2: Two


One
chapter 1   —   updated 05/11/08   —   997 characters   —   4 people liked it   —   4 reviews
Once upon a time in an unfinished moment, an absence of weary voices, an implicit ban on remembrance or telling of events

Orderly thoughts were still forming in the diffuse extension of the Universe, or the so-called Mind…

Movement, inner cries, convulsion, memories. There, on the very verge of outer space, in the midst of chaos… revolution

Some force swallowed in an instant any sense of sanity like the anteater its pray

This is how all came to happen, a something that started before starts were settled and such a thing like a beginning was known

This is how it was revealed. A sudden impulse emerged, carrying it out

Then did those images insist on coming back and staying, so much, so often, over and over, that the feeling of embarrassment overwhelmed no more

But, could words describe? Is there a way to take you there? Could the path be opened with a machete or with a sword?

Need company. No fairy magic wand, no much strength. Tight road ahead.
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chapter 1 review
Carlos said:
" its not bad... not bad at all, i kind a like it... specially the last part... "is there a way to take you there?"... and i laught with the m...more "

424383
chapter 1 review
Karey Shane said:
" In Chapter One it sounds like a difficult journey is about it begin. I have questions...What is the sudden impulse that emerges? Why did it cause emba...more "

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chapter 2 review
Carlos said:
" i liked this better than the other one... aaahhh.. time... my favorite theme!... i hope you write more of it... "

424383
chapter 2 review
Karey Shane said:
" In Chapter Two I'm left wondering what the rain had swept away. Is it something she was hoping would be erased? "

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