First Kiss, First Love

by Chi-Chi
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genre: Drama
description:
The one thing that most people want to share with the love of their lifes has finally come.


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chapter 1: The Kiss


The Kiss
chapter 1   —   updated 10/15/08   —   1620 characters   —   4 people liked it   —   3 reviews
Your hands are wrapped around my waist, and I feel that nothing in the world can hurt me. You whisper 'I love you' into my ear in your deep, caring, sing-song voice, causing shivers down my spine. Your breath dances and weaves in my chocolate locks, and I manage to turn and see your mezmorizing sapphire blue orbes staring back at me. I whisper "I love you" back, barely managing to get those three words to come out of my mouth. You bend down several inches to reach my height, and place one warm finger under my chin. You raise my head to stare into my eyes, and at that moment, nothing else in the world can I hear. How can you stand this? You could have almost any other person in this world, and for some reason, you choose me. I can feel my heart to race faster and faster, until I am almost sure that you can hear it too. You continue to stare at me from underneath your long, jet black lashes. Finally, after what seems to be eternity and some, you bend your head down so that your soft lips caress mine. I have my arms entangeled in your honey blond hair, and your hands slowly move up and down the small of my back. I can barely breath, this whole experience takes my breath away from me. My lips move as yours do, right now, nothing else can measure up to how I am feeling. I am walking on clouds in the sky, I am floating on air in the wind. Our lips finally part, and we can finally catch the breath that we need. Then, it dawns on me, this was my first kiss, and I shared it with the only person that I can love with all my heart. My one true love has taken my first kiss, and I couldn't be any happier.
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Angela said:
" how sweet! lots of metaphors, nice writing. "

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*JayJay* said:
" ooooh. way to make the moment last. keep on writing. r u a romance author? "

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Ale said:
" i loved it. it is really detailed. i feel like i am actually there. "

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