An Ode

by Nii

genre: Poetry
description:
a stream of consciousness

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chapter 1: Night Ode

Night Ode

chapter 1 — updated 10/20/08 — 283 characters — 3 people liked it — 2 reviews

Night Ode
Depart, sharp-prowed ship
While darkness is hiding
Behind the sun’s disk
Our spirits abiding
In far off safe havens
Wile away the hours
Yearning, learning to miss
Expressions of now or
Blaming tomorrow’s insanity
On night’s freeing of humanity

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Erin said:

" I love the darkness and depth of this piece, Nii. It's beautiful. I long to delve into and enjoy more of your work. Night should reach out and than...more "

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Harmony said:

" Once again Nicole, nice job!! I especially loved your word usage. It flows so nicely and some of the words are just extra awesome: depart, abiding, ...more "

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