My Heart
by *~Itsz All Readi Been Done No More Contest~* *~Victoria Keith Isz Minesz N Alwaysz will B~*
genre:
Poetry
description:
SO FAR!!!
chapters
chapter 1:
My Love
chapter 2:
Weirdly Taking In
chapter 3:
Im Mad
chapter 4:
I Can't Do It
My Love
chapter 1
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updated 07/08/08
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BABY I LUV U BUT I CANT SHO U I DEW,
U SAY U LUV ME BUT HOW DEW I KNO ITZ DA TRUTH
I GAVE UP ON A LOT OF THINGZ
BUT I AINT GIVIN UP ON U, NO WUT I MEAN
ITZ CRAZY I CANT B WIT U
ITZ LIKE MY HEART GOT RIPPED OUT LIKE TISSUE
I FEEL SO DOWN
ITZ LIKE IM AIRBORNE N BOUT 2 HIT DA GROUND
IM SCARED OF LOSIN DA LUV WE HAVE 4 EACH UDDA
OUR LUV IZ SLIPPIN AWAY LIKE MELTED BUTTA
I WANNA KNO IF WE CAN START OVA N LUV EACH UDDA AGAIN
IF WE DEW START OVA I DON WANT DA STARTIN 2 END
I MADE DIS CUZ @ 1ST I THOUGHT I WUZ OVA U
I CANT DEW IT @ ALL SO Y KEEP TRYIN WUTZ DA USE
WE HURT DA BOTH OF EACH UDDA N WE PROLLY GON HAVE ISSUES
BUT WE R NOT MAGAZINES UR A LADY N UMMA DUDE
I LUV U WIT ALL MY HEART
N I WILL TIL DEATH DEW ME PART
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U SAY U LUV ME BUT HOW DEW I KNO ITZ DA TRUTH
I GAVE UP ON A LOT OF THINGZ
BUT I AINT GIVIN UP ON U, NO WUT I MEAN
ITZ CRAZY I CANT B WIT U
ITZ LIKE MY HEART GOT RIPPED OUT LIKE TISSUE
I FEEL SO DOWN
ITZ LIKE IM AIRBORNE N BOUT 2 HIT DA GROUND
IM SCARED OF LOSIN DA LUV WE HAVE 4 EACH UDDA
OUR LUV IZ SLIPPIN AWAY LIKE MELTED BUTTA
I WANNA KNO IF WE CAN START OVA N LUV EACH UDDA AGAIN
IF WE DEW START OVA I DON WANT DA STARTIN 2 END
I MADE DIS CUZ @ 1ST I THOUGHT I WUZ OVA U
I CANT DEW IT @ ALL SO Y KEEP TRYIN WUTZ DA USE
WE HURT DA BOTH OF EACH UDDA N WE PROLLY GON HAVE ISSUES
BUT WE R NOT MAGAZINES UR A LADY N UMMA DUDE
I LUV U WIT ALL MY HEART
N I WILL TIL DEATH DEW ME PART
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chapter 1 review
♫❤✰✭Angelcakez0101✭✰❤♫
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... this was too cute ,, thats nice that u have feelings for ur ladii like that
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chapter 1 review
PRiNC3SS KRiSSY 2 U SiLLY H03Z
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AAAAWWWW...i H0P3 YALL W0RK iT 0UT BR0TH3R!!
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chapter 1 review
ii'M DA BADD3ST....
said:
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AWH.... BRUDDA WH0 iiSz DiiSz F3MAL3 DAT G0T U H3ARTBR0K3 & C0NFUS3....
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chapter 1 review
~.:3SA*TRAV13SA:.~
said:
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i like dis its really good ppl can relate 2 wat u sayin dats so sweet
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chapter 1 review
MARISA
said:
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that was a really good poem it touched me. you know how to speak your mind.your girl sure is lucky to have you in her life it's good to know that some...more
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chapter 1 review
Mia
said:
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aw tony i liked it you do have somewhat of an heart u not that much of an asshole after all lol but i feel u on that
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chapter 1 review
Keanna
said:
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Wish I could have put my feelings towards my boy, like you just did for your girl, down on paper. really good man
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chapter 3 review
tony
said:
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no i dont like it cuz u told me i was ur world an u keep sayin shit like theres not a gurl in this world 4 u when im right here fand i always hav and ...more
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chapter 4 review
tony
said:
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is this dedicated to me baby cuz u now i love u and ill always be urs...!!!LOLLOAM kiss kiss
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