Sea of Shadow - Sea of Shadow by ♥ Brigid ♥
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This poem I wrote in seventh grade, when we were given an assignment to sit outside in the dark and write down all our thoughts. and i came up with this...
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Sea of Shadow
Sea of Shadow
chapter 1
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updated Apr 17, 2009
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I sit on an island surrounded by sea,
an island hard and made of stone,
the waves rise around it,
waves of grass,
and waves of shadow.
The island I sit on is hard and alone,
and the sea of shadows
whispers around me.
The tree beside me is tall and old,
speckled like a leopard
with eerie shadows,
shadows born in the flickering light,
from the flashlight I grip with fingers cold as ice.
the tree reaches a twisted arm,
a twisted branch,
above my head,
a hundred leafy fingers spread
as if reaching out to grab me.
And through the leaves I see patches
of star filled sky,
gazing down up on me, like a million eyes.
The road before me is silent and empty.
Cars rarely pass on this lonely road.
A streetlamp shines a ghostly light
upon its emptiness,
like a light shining on an empty stage.
The house across the street seems to stare at me,
through eyes made of lifeless gray panes of glass,
and the blank stare chills me to the bone.
And shivering on an island of stone,
I sit,
afraid,
cold,
and alone.
back to top
an island hard and made of stone,
the waves rise around it,
waves of grass,
and waves of shadow.
The island I sit on is hard and alone,
and the sea of shadows
whispers around me.
The tree beside me is tall and old,
speckled like a leopard
with eerie shadows,
shadows born in the flickering light,
from the flashlight I grip with fingers cold as ice.
the tree reaches a twisted arm,
a twisted branch,
above my head,
a hundred leafy fingers spread
as if reaching out to grab me.
And through the leaves I see patches
of star filled sky,
gazing down up on me, like a million eyes.
The road before me is silent and empty.
Cars rarely pass on this lonely road.
A streetlamp shines a ghostly light
upon its emptiness,
like a light shining on an empty stage.
The house across the street seems to stare at me,
through eyes made of lifeless gray panes of glass,
and the blank stare chills me to the bone.
And shivering on an island of stone,
I sit,
afraid,
cold,
and alone.
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Charlizechat
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Vivid yet simple imagery makes this evocative throughout. The sense of dread builds wonderfully-- it's surprising when this "island of stone"...more
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Chavaleh
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You write like I do, spread the feelings on your paper as they come. It is wonderful!
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Taylor
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wow this is by far the best poem i've ever read on here. then again i just signed up today.
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Elizabeth
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Wow. Loved the descriptions. It feels so wretched. Creepy wretched. I like it.
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Acacia
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Your poetry is as good as your prose! Brigid, you're simply an amazing writer.
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