Only One - Only one by Domino
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This a poem i wrote when i had alot of stuff going through in my mind and i wrote my thoughts in words
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Only one
Only one
chapter 1
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updated Apr 21, 2009
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Here I am alone by myself
No ones there to care no ones there to help
My heart is full of anger mind full of hate
My lips is quiverin with words as i hesitate
Are you on my side when things are going down
Or am i gonna see you are no where to be found
People think they know you by the wrong that you have did
But did they know you would rather die then had have lived
My mother has lost hope and my father was never there
Now i understand why they say that life isnt really fair
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No ones there to care no ones there to help
My heart is full of anger mind full of hate
My lips is quiverin with words as i hesitate
Are you on my side when things are going down
Or am i gonna see you are no where to be found
People think they know you by the wrong that you have did
But did they know you would rather die then had have lived
My mother has lost hope and my father was never there
Now i understand why they say that life isnt really fair
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**~HIS MISS.LADII~**
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AWWW BOO BOO THATS CUTE DONT WORRY THOUGH IM ALWAYS HERE FOR U ....
LOVE KC
XOXOXO "
LOVE KC
XOXOXO "
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Toniesha
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I like this poem josh but remember you're never alone i'm still here for you =)
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SoUpE...yIpEe!!
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I loved it. It was very good. I love it...I'm speechless! It was real good!
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Erica Jane
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This is amazing an so true takes the words I never uttered and makes tehm real. Wow, amazing!!! thanks!
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Bjdagreat43
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dats my nigga right der though thick an thin i got dat nigga back this nigga like fam no homo im outta
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Cleveland
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I know this is part of your last line by consider:
"they say that life isnt really fair "
making it your very first line. …more "
"they say that life isnt really fair "
making it your very first line. …more "
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Joan
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I liked it.
That is really good, it really gives an idea of how you were feeling, and what you were thinking. Keep writing!
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That is really good, it really gives an idea of how you were feeling, and what you were thinking. Keep writing!
2 Thumbs…more "
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Shai'ann
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this poem rocked off my socks seriously how deep is it its awesome man keep it up??/
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Enoch
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I read your poem twice because I appreciate your ability to record your feelings. You have a strong sense of meter and verse. My preference is for mor…more
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La.day.sha
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I like this poem.It makes me think about alot of things that has happen in my past.
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