Roses for June
by ♥Roni♥
genre:
Drama
description:
A girl with an abusive mother begins to recieve roses from a mysterious sender. Each one has a different Roses are Red poem attached.
As she tries to figure out the roses and her now changing life, a mysterious boy begins to appear.
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Chapter 1
chapter 1
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updated 10/12/08
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85 people liked it
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To even the careful observer, the room was extraordinarily cluttered. In one corner was a dresser with a few scattered hair bands and a brush sitting upon it. Everywhere else, as far as the eye could see, stacks of books, papers, magazines, notebooks, boxes of pens and pencils, and just about everything that had anything to do with reading or writing covered the floor and tiny bedside table. Next to the table was a small bed, which was also covered in books, and looked as though it was very intimidated by everything around and on top of it. At the foot of the bed was a very cushy arm chair. In it sat a girl of 15. Every part of her was frozen into what seemed a perpetual stillness, except for her dark green eyes. They were nothing more than a blur as they traveled across the page of the book in her hands.
Downstairs, the doorbell rang louder than thunder. The girl lifted a hand and turned the page. Half a minute later, her hand lifted again and-
“JUNE!” The girl was vaguely aware that someone was calling her name from a very distant place. She cast her eyes around the room before turning them back to her book.“JUNE!” By now the girl had continued reading, her eyes once more a blur. “Dammit June! Get the damn door!”
The profanity teleported her from her fantasy of the deepest part of the Amazon Rainforest and back into her bedroom. She sighed angrily as she put the book down. Jack had been about to kill the leader of the peaceful tribe, and her mother had interrupted it with vulgar swearing and an unnecessarily commanding order.
June gingerly got up anyways. She didn’t want her mom to start hitting her again; she still had the bruises from last time she had screwed up. She even had bruises from the time before that. June thought about the incident as she pushed past her mother, standing like an ominous thundercloud outside her bedroom, and walked to the door. June had been at her friend’s house, lost track of time, and missed her ridiculously early curfew of 5 PM by ten minutes. When she arrived home, her drunken mother had asked her what time it was, and she had lied. It turned out that her mother had already known what time it was. That beating had particularly hurt, but June had refused to cry, just as she always refused, so as to not give her mother the satisfaction.
June returned from her flashback and answered the door. Standing there was a man with a single yellow flower.
“I am here to deliver this flower for a June Brodey. Are you June?”
Shocked, she nodded and took the flower. A card was attached. She glanced at it and saw a message.
June~
Most Roses are red
And violets blue
I send this flower of friendship
To say I care about you.
~A Friend
Slowly, never taking her eyes from the card, she closed the door.
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chapter 1 review
♥ Brigid ♥
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ooh. intriguing. i like it! :)
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chapter 1 review
Michelle
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What happens next? Keep going, I like it!
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chapter 1 review
Sella
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I like this! It really captures my attention. Keep going!
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chapter 1 review
Ephona
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Great! I like it!
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chapter 1 review
Kristen
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I like this. Her room sounds like mine:).
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chapter 1 review
Jackie
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Come on Roni, where's the next Chapt. we all want to read more!
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chapter 1 review
Hannah
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chapter 1 review
Randi
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woah this is really good!
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chapter 2 review
♥ Brigid ♥
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wow. the second chapter is really intense...it's kinda scary. But I like it! I want to read more :)
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chapter 2 review
Kenzie
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That was so sad. Her mother didn't even care that she had broken her arm. Does her father care for her at least?
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chapter 2 review
Josh
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this is great! Keep going, i want to know how it ends.
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chapter 2 review
Maya
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I hate her mother!!
Poor June..
What will happen next?? Can't wait..
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chapter 2 review
Margaret
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*crys*
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chapter 3 review
Kenzie
said:
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I loved it! It was a short chapter, but you know, the story should only be as long as it needs to be to tell the tale, so short is good for this chapt
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chapter 3 review
Morgan
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Why aren't you writing more? This is great!
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chapter 3 review
♥ Brigid ♥
said:
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omg! so good! i really liked the reference to Holes, cuz that is one of my favorite books ever--and it was a really cool analogy! :D
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chapter 3 review
Cristi
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Loved It duh!!!
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chapter 4 review
Sella
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chapter 4 review
Cristi
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Still lovin' it!
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chapter 5 review
Kenzie
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Maybe? What do you mean maybe? You might write more on this chapter, maybe, or that you might write more of this book, maybe? I hope it's the first on
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chapter 5 review
♥ Brigid ♥
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to be continued MAYBE??!! veronica, you HAVE to finish this! I'm really curious to know what happens! i luv this story! please post some more...
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chapter 5 review
Michelle
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Please hurry up and write, I want to now what happens!
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chapter 5 review
Cristi
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AHHH! Don't Stop NOW! GET ON THE COMPUTER AND WRITE MORE!!!! please?
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chapter 5 review
Margaret
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Do I believe the mother or not? hmm...
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chapter 6 review
Rainy
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roni that was amazing. write,write,and write some more.
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chapter 6 review
Sella
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Aww!! :D
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chapter 6 review
Jackie
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Besides a few errors I loved it! Keep going please! It is very realistic too!
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chapter 6 review
~Clare~
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I wanteth more!!!! lol : D
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chapter 6 review
Ashlee
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All I can say is
WOW!. It is amazing. The tory line and characters a really good. You might want to have a little more description on the charc
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chapter 6 review
Kenzie
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That was a great chapter Roni. Nice work!
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chapter 6 review
Michelle
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omg! that's so sweet and at the same time so sad!! its amazing. you have to keep going, i love this story!!
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chapter 6 review
Margaret
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Yeah! The story is moving along rather quickly, but it's a good speed for a short story.
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chapter 6 review
Riley
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I love how Sharon is making an effort to turn her life around. It makes me sympathize with her instead of thinking about how terrible she must be to b
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chapter 7 review
Michelle
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YAY!! THIS IS AMAZING!! I NEED MORE!!!
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chapter 7 review
Rainy
said:
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Veronica!, this is amazing!. The story is so addicting, I find myself hooked. More More More!
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chapter 7 review
Morgan
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Lol, I love it!
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chapter 7 review
Jackie
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I did not see any errors Roni and it is still so good, I can't wait for the next chapter. I think it looks AWESOME so far... You should check out Webo
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chapter 7 review
Kenzie
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Yay! You put him into the story, as a real person! I bet he's happy! (wow...that sounded awkward, but you know what I mean.)
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chapter 7 review
~Clare~
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WOW! Please can you write more soonly?! haha
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chapter 7 review
Sarah
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R.S.V.P.
Fantastic job! I love the way your clever words flow together to create something very simple, yet very beautiful. You have excellent word c
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chapter 8 review
~Clare~
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awesomest of awesomest!!! please please please write more!!!!
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chapter 8 review
Kenzie
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Cliffhanger!!!! Gah!
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chapter 8 review
Heather
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Keep going, I know what he's gonna do, but keep going, it's good! :)
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chapter 8 review
Margaret
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I loves it!
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chapter 8 review
Rachel
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chapter 9 review
♥ Brigid ♥
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awwww! :) luv it!
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chapter 9 review
Riley
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Is this the end? I just want to know, cause it's a good ending if it is. As Brigid said, "Awwwww..." It's very cute, and promises a lot.
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chapter 9 review
Margaret
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Your words flow so effortlessly! You are a very optimistic, talented writer.
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chapter 9 review
Kenzie
said:
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One cliffhanger down ... another blocking my view. LOL XD
Loved it, Roni! As usual.... XD
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chapter 9 review
Sella
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Oooh! This is sweet! I want to read more! :D
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chapter 9 review
Shmoo
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chapter 9 review
Tiffany
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i can't wait for chapter 10 to come out :D
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chapter 9 review
~Clare~
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yay!
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chapter 10 review
Kenzie
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YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YE
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chapter 10 review
Riley
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*hyperventilating* OMIGOSH OMIGOSH OMIGOSH OMIGOSH OMIGOSH!!!!!!! PERFECT PERFECT!!!!! THE CLIMAX!!!!!!
GET ME CHAPTER 11 NOW!!!
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chapter 10 review
♥ Brigid ♥
said:
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awwww!!! <3 <3 <3 sooo cute. XD luv it!
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chapter 10 review
Sella
said:
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Awwwww!!!!! :D So sweet!! :D
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chapter 10 review
~Clare~
said:
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HAHHA OMG!!! Wow!!! Can't wait to see where this is going!!!
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chapter 10 review
Michelle
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omg, keep going!!!
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chapter 11 review
Shmoo
said:
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awesome as usual!! more please!!!!!
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chapter 11 review
Riley
said:
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*hyperventilating*
OMG this is almost as good as Twilight! IT'S AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
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chapter 11 review
♥ Brigid ♥
said:
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awww!!!! :D so sweet!
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chapter 11 review
Molli
said:
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Awwww! It's so sweet! I hope you'll continue.
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chapter 11 review
Sella
said:
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Awww~!!!!! :D
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chapter 12 review
Kenzie
said:
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Cliffhanger, again! Do you enjoy torturing me?
JK!
Loved it, of course.
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chapter 12 review
♥ Brigid ♥
said:
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awesome!! :D although there was one part when you accidentally switched to the third person while june was telling her story: "He grabbed onto he
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chapter 12 review
Sella
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Double awww!!! XD Wow, sooo sweet!!! I need more!!! Stop with the cliffhangers already!! :P lol XD
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chapter 12 review
Saved By Grace
said:
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WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH *wipes away happy tear*. Okay. Pretend I didn't just type that.
Really, though, it is such a wonderful story.
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chapter 12 review
Riley
said:
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Aww...that's nice. So cute. So sweet. But don't make it terrible for June again Roni! Please! I think I know what you have in mind, but don't do it!
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chapter 13 review
Sella
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OMG NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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chapter 14 review
Sella
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Ah, this is so sad! :(
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chapter 15 review
Saved By Grace
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WHY?
I had no idea it was ending this soon. I thought it would be really, really long and awesome. It was short and awesome. Still...I almost cried
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chapter 15 review
Riley
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Aww...you left me hanging.
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chapter 15 review
Sella
said:
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Aww!! You're making me cry!! :( really sad but really good ending!! i was a bit surprised on how short it was, but still..wow!! :D
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