Learning the Characters
by Koeeoaddi
genre:
Poetry
description:
poetry
chapters
chapter 1:
Yue Liang - The Moon
Yue Liang - The Moon
chapter 1
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updated 11/17/08
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Learning the Characters
(Yue Liang - The Moon)
My hand,
stiff as horsehair
falters and balks.
"The moon," he tells me
and draws the lines.
Listen to me.
I grind the ink,
look into the wet black slab
but see no sky.
I worry my hand
across the page
the sun fastened tight
to obstinate dusk.
"Watch"
he insists.
His lesson forms
in rock and light.
I retrace his strokes,
and he smiles --
my crude moon
climbs a crumpled sky.
But later
alone at my desk,
I sketch the spiny shadow
of the asparagus fern,
a cat on the sill
looking into the night
And the moon
blooms like an orchid
underneath
my astonished brush.
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(Yue Liang - The Moon)
My hand,
stiff as horsehair
falters and balks.
"The moon," he tells me
and draws the lines.
Listen to me.
I grind the ink,
look into the wet black slab
but see no sky.
I worry my hand
across the page
the sun fastened tight
to obstinate dusk.
"Watch"
he insists.
His lesson forms
in rock and light.
I retrace his strokes,
and he smiles --
my crude moon
climbs a crumpled sky.
But later
alone at my desk,
I sketch the spiny shadow
of the asparagus fern,
a cat on the sill
looking into the night
And the moon
blooms like an orchid
underneath
my astonished brush.
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Jackie "the Librarian"
said:
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I love this. The word choices are so evocative and rich, this is one dense poem.
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chapter 1 review
Lorna
said:
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beautiful imagery. love the staccato lines. and what an ending. hushed.
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Elijah
said:
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I just have to say that I love the way you transfer the moon's immensity to a subjection at the end. Just awesome.
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