Cold-Pressed Extra Virgin - Cold-Pressed Extra Virgin by Ruth Bavetta

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Cold-Pressed Extra Virgin
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Cold-Pressed Extra Virgin

My mother says I’m lucky.
When she was sixty
her crows’ feet had spread
until it looked like crows
had walked all over her face.

“Your skin comes
from your father’s side of the family,”
she says, “the Italian side.
They don’t get wrinkles.
It’s all that olive oil.

“Look at your Aunt Rosa.
Her skin was so smooth
the mortician didn’t even need to use makeup,
but he did, of course,
they all do, heaven knows why.
Who wants to look like a madam
when they’re dead?
Don’t let them do it to me.”

Published in Ilya's Honey Spring 2004 and Nerve Cowboy Spring 2006
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" Especially loved the last line! "
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Dottie said:
" Another wow, Ruth. And yes, I like that last line also. "
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Barbara said:
" Ruth, you caught a certain frank quality that some people have the continuum of life, such a straight shot from good skin to the mortician. Excellent…more "
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Newengland said:
" The Italians benefit from olive oil but suffer from open-casket wakes. This poem underlines the point well with that "madam" line. Wow. I…more "
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Barbara said:
" Good one Ruth! "
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Gail said:
" I really liked this, Ruth. You really captured the feel of a mother-daughter conversation. "
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" amen, sistah ruth. "
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" Very real. "
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" It is all in the olive oil. "
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Cyrelda26 said:
" don't let them do it to me." "
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♥♥maddie♥♥ said:
" this sounds like a conversation i would have with my mom in the future. it's great! =] "
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" i liked this poem. good job!^_^ "
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