A Pure Heart
by Nathan Smith
genre:
Poetry
description:
A poem about staying strong and not letting bad things keep you down
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chapter 1:
A Pure Heart
A Pure Heart
chapter 1
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updated 08/06/08
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Even though it hurts
this heart still beats strong
ready and willing
to still supply it's pure love
unlike others
I won't let mine harden
to clot my arteries of emotion
I still have lots to give
It's the only thing I rely on
to keep me existent
I'll never run short
I'm a lifelong donor
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this heart still beats strong
ready and willing
to still supply it's pure love
unlike others
I won't let mine harden
to clot my arteries of emotion
I still have lots to give
It's the only thing I rely on
to keep me existent
I'll never run short
I'm a lifelong donor
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Ilyn
said:
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I like the optimism.
I would like the poem more without "unlike others".
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I would like the poem more without "unlike others".
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