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Torn Away (Literature & Fiction)
description: I stare into Keira’s blank eyes; trying to grasp what’s happened. She’s still staring in my direction, but her consciousness is gone. I want to leave; I want to run away and never think of her again, because with every second I linger I can feel my insides ripping up and my memories getting distorted; because how could that happy little girl in my mind possibly be the same unmoving, still one lying in front of me?
But I stay. She was my only friend; my only companion that I could bear. And now that she’s gone and I feel that it’s my fault; that I should have taken better care of her. Her silence holds me still and I wait quietly.
Brianna yearned for peace. Now she wants freedom. With the absence of a mother, she lives with her abusive father and the dying sister that she'd jump in front of a bullet for. But it isn't enough.
Keira is still fading and Bree can’t do anything to prevent it, and when things make a turn for the worst and she feels completely abandoned; her whole world changes. But now Brianna is worried that if she can’t make up what wasn’t her fault her regret and pain will internally kill her until there is nothing left.
chapter 1: Chapter One (added 2009/10/17 )
chapter 2: Chapter Two (added 2009/10/17 )
chapter 3: Chapter Three (added 2009/10/17 )
chapter 4: Chapter Four (added 2009/10/17 )
chapter 5: Chapter Five (added 2009/10/18 )
chapter 6: Chapter Six (added 2009/10/20 )
chapter 7: Chapter Seven (added 2009/11/05 )
chapter 8: Capter Eight (added 2009/11/05 )
But I stay. She was my only friend; my only companion that I could bear. And now that she’s gone and I feel that it’s my fault; that I should have taken better care of her. Her silence holds me still and I wait quietly.
Brianna yearned for peace. Now she wants freedom. With the absence of a mother, she lives with her abusive father and the dying sister that she'd jump in front of a bullet for. But it isn't enough.
Keira is still fading and Bree can’t do anything to prevent it, and when things make a turn for the worst and she feels completely abandoned; her whole world changes. But now Brianna is worried that if she can’t make up what wasn’t her fault her regret and pain will internally kill her until there is nothing left.
chapter 1: Chapter One (added 2009/10/17 )
chapter 2: Chapter Two (added 2009/10/17 )
chapter 3: Chapter Three (added 2009/10/17 )
chapter 4: Chapter Four (added 2009/10/17 )
chapter 5: Chapter Five (added 2009/10/18 )
chapter 6: Chapter Six (added 2009/10/20 )
chapter 7: Chapter Seven (added 2009/11/05 )
chapter 8: Capter Eight (added 2009/11/05 )
