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On a Whim by Robin Jones Gunn
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Apr 02, 10

it was ok

Boring and way too sappy. I understand what the author is doing, creating a world of niceties and wholesomeness, but come on! Let's have a bit of conflict more than, "Why didn't you tell me you were leaving early?"
"Oh, I didn't?"
"No, you didn't."
"Oh, I'm sorry."
"I'm sorry, too." (not actual dialogue, but close)

Not all that well-written, either. It doesn't flow well and is chunky in places.
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