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The Line by Teri Hall
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Mar 24, 10

bookshelves: adventure, dystopia, ya
Read from March 22 to 24, 2010

Ew, not impressed. The writing was extremely cheesy (I felt like an older woman was trying to write for teenagers - and not in a good way) and none of this story felt like it could have been real. I seriously spent more time thinking about why I didn't really like this book rather than thinking about the actual story. Clearly it wasn't enough to grab me and make me forget about the annoying writing. Cool concept, but really only in theory - the actual execution was not enough to keep me interested.
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03/22/2010 page 112
51.14% "Eh, this book, especially the writing in this book, just seems cheesy cheesy cheesy so far"

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