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Dreams of the Ringed Vale by Robert Fanney
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Dec 19, 14

Read in December, 2014

Appropriate for: age 14+
You will like this book if you like: Fantasy, elves

This book had two main flaws and a complaint from me.

1. He tries to make this book so EPIC, extra epic written by Mr. Epic. It's like "You don't need to try so hard sheesh." The story was interesting, but it's so obvious he's trying to copy Tolkien

2. He has no idea how to use commas. Almost every place there should be one, there isn't. Also some other typos such as a 7 instead of a ?

The ending is the WORST kind of cliffhanger. He made no move to even wrap it up. We understand there's a sequel, but each book should have some kind of ending.

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